All Comments on 'After School Special'

Very hot, one of my fantasies I had a very sexy health class teacher in highschool

This is a well thought out and very lively written. It could be a text book for a young peron to study and make a goal of achieveing.

Ya got me off, great story!

I’ve read this story countless times. It’s fucking awesome!

I loved how you worked this story well.

Loved reading this story.

Fucking excellent

Totally hot! I wish i had a teacher like Miss Ross when I was in school. Keep going! 5/5

I really enjoyed reading this story, it was extremely hot and the lovemaking was a joy to read.

I have some constructive criticism here to improve your stories readability, I haven’t read many of your other stories yet. The typos were a little disappointing causing some rereading in parts, some typos would not have been caught due to making proper word like ‘son’, the ‘s’ had an extra space carried from the previous word onto the word ‘on’.

My suggestion might be to use something, maybe like Word spellcheck and grammar check on your stories before finalizing and preparing an upload of your stories. You would have a better finalized product and it would make it easier for the reader to read.

In my work career, I taught computer programmers how to write test scripts to test their applications for FDA approval for drug testing Merck Pharmaceuticals and Purdue Pharmaceuticals. I did a lot of editing with Word, and some of it seems to stand out sometimes.

I loved this story as I loved all of your stories I’ve read.

Home is where the heart is comes to mind.

i enjoyed reading this tale,,,,every young males fantasy!!well done.

Love all of your stories this one was very good.

I have one moan - your always say lied.

Lied means to not tell the truth - it should be lay apart from that excellent.

if Simone had been a Mulatto babe then the story would be a hall of famer. I love black pussy. I had an experience with my 10th grade English . She would punish me for something and make me stay after class,while she finished paper work. Then she would drive me to house. This went on for a while until she started the "I have to stop by my apartment " for something,do you mind ? I fumbled my way through my second piece of ass and first pussy licking experience. This continued through my sophomore and junior years of HS. I was 16-17 years old and she was in her twenties. It all blew up because she kept me after class 2 or 3 times a week and my parents got suspicious. She got fired and I went off to Military school for 2 years . I think of her often and truly loved the experience and the things she taught me.

Loved it … I’ve been reading on this site for many years … this is as good as it gets!

Very HOT story

wish I was MS Ross 😍

In the first class of the Juniors we had one Miss Toms and all the boys fancied her. I neverdid find out what happened to her but it was over 70 years ago now so she is probably in her grave by now.

Fuvkig good story

"Have you lied alone in your bed and thought of me?"

*lain alone

A good English teacher like Miss Ross would have known that.

One of those forbidden subjects, very well done👍

All I can say is wow. One of the hottest stories I've read in this site.

Speechless! I'm old enough to be retired, have never cheated on my wife, but still have fantasies.

Excellent, erotic, exciting and amazingly beautiful.

I liked the more discriped sex screens in this story!!!

Great. Funny, sexy and fantasy filled. Loved the premise.

Ah, Miss Ross reminds me of an art history teacher I had when I waas in college. She dressed exactly the same way and her body language was definitely "come fuck me." I felt very inferior to her so all I ever got out of it was magnificient hard-ons and gallons of cum wasted into toilets in the restroom. Those long, long legs... ummmm... I think I'm going to re-create it in the bathroom right now! Bye, bye.

The answer to her question , “How do I look, fucking you?”, should have been, “You look like my wife, and the mother of my children!” Because that is obviously what you both want, and what lies in the future for both of you. It’s the sexiest fantasy, because it’s real!!! Knock the bitch up and do NOT let her avoid it!!!!!

That’s so hot.

Awesome.

My heart was racing and I had a boner from start to finish. Sequel? 🎭

Fantastic work! One of the best one here!

A regular fantasy of mine was the older woman seducing the younger man.

First class and hot!

I needed a teacher like her... dangit!

Next chapter

Every time I read this I pick up on something I glazed over. Excellent work!

Nicely done 😊👍.

Think this is the 3rd or fourth Ive read of yours like so many others I guess my favourite fantasy arises from my sexual awakening with teachers in every sense and Im mad about very short skirts(preferably ones which flare out, rather than tight) Stunning take me quite a while to recover

thank you so very much

Is it just me but does this seem ripped off from that’s my boy except the teacher doesn’t wind up pregnant

Actually incredible! Awesome ! Great story & characters

I love this I wish that would had happened when I when to school

Very well written piece. I wish there was a sequel.

Absolutely amazing just like the rest of your stories that I have read so far! You are so unbelievably good at running with that slow burn until all of a sudden it's a raging, boiling pot of uncontrolled lust! I love your style!

This was a wonderful read and made me wish I was back in my thirties when I could actually do this kind of fucklng and then clean up my mess.

This is your best story easily to me and it’s one of the best stories on the site especially in terms of layout. Each page ends with a cliffhanger that makes the reader rush to click to the next page of action. Perhaps she’s a bit crude and it’s not as romantic as a guy’s first time should be, but you made the perfect teacher. I picture Kortney Kane the pornstar for her. You should make a sequel. This is really that good.

Brings back memories of a teacher from high school... she was single, tall & thin, soft ball size tits that always stood out. We called 'em High Beam headlights. Many dreams of her.

This may have been the best story I’ve read on Literotica in over 700 reads. Hope there are sequels as there is a summer of fun ahead. I note that you get about 10 times the comments as the other popular author I have read. Proofreading your copy would be beneficial as there are many errors that are easily correctable.

AWESOME !!!!!!

Very well written fantasy. It made you feel like you were in the story. Very easy to visualize. A few grammar and punctuation errors.

Great story it is well hot and made me think of my school boy teacher crushes although I never got that lucky lol🤔

OMG! I Loved This Story.

My vibrator & I finished reading it together.

Tonight my hubby will journey back to his highschool years & find his own teacher fantasy fulfilled.!! Thanks

Pretty damn hot, especially about a teacher. Every dude’s fantasy. 5*

I just wish I could be the man who is the teacher's fav

Really hot fantasy, well written except for a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. They don’t detract at all, thhanks

Incredibly hot story. Well written as well. So needs a follow up about the summer of sin 😆 BardnotBard

In a follow up on my previous comment, I frequently wish there was a continuation of the story. But I think more of the Ms. Ross and Todd tale would just be a fuck fest and not that interesting, unless Kim was brought into the story. The education of Todd could really be a plus for Kim. Bet there could be some quirky issues involved. I'll watch for something new.

Yeah, this subject is one of my favorites. I just started on Lit but the next one I post is going to be with my own favorite teacher. Mine actually happened. Only the names will be changed. The way you worked the story to allow the wrong email to be sent was masterful. While I quickly figured it out, it was believable. It drives me crazy when comments criticize nitpicking mistakes. The story was an excellent example of a variety of genres. Thanks for writing it!

I bet that you did not proof read even once

quote principle unquote is not the word you were looking for

Excellent, really inspired writing!

You have details, passion and setting.

It is clever how you weave the story with comments by Miss Ross on how to improve Todd’s own writing. And the way you have woven Todd’s story into the bigger story. Wonderful!

that was great. way better than the normal offering.

I love this story. I can relate because I fucked two of my teachers, both of them were awesome in bed and taught me very much. Both had great body's but one was pretty in her own way. One of them was extremely hot and strait up beautiful that all of us dreamed of fucking her. I don't know how I got to be the lucky one I don't know.

Incandescently hot. My second reading of this masterpiece was a good as the first.

That was a hot read. Really enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

That was a fun read!! Love the characters and the twist between story and "real life"!! Would love to hear more of his education!!

EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

A full ten star story, built well and exceptionally executed, although as you writing reached for its climax occasional letters started to leave their appropriate place and appeared in either the previous or following word, this does not detract from the reading but adds to the intended excitement.

Please consider following up with 'Summer School ' as Todd has a considerable amount of learning to do before he can be let loose on the general female population.

Oh My Gosh! That was SO much fun to read!!!!! Story was great, descriptions were amazing, writing was outstanding!!! Just fantastic. Thank you so much for all your work!!!!

The premise was okay, the sex lacking. Shoving fingers in holes, really? Maybe next time she'll teach him to slide them in, scissor his fingers and I don't know find the g-spot? A finger rammed up the ass is not sexy, he could tease with the top of his finger and work from there. Also why would a man not want to suck a nip if it has a bit of sperm on it? If it's good for her it's good for him. First chapter was interesting, the fantasies cleary the toughts of a teenager. In between in got messy and the last chapter was hot.

Excellent story really agree with you about the build up being important Thank you for sharing

Would love to see this fleshed out, A Summer of Lust. Maybe throwing Kim into the mix.

This just gets better every time I read it! It's one of my all time favorites.

Thank you!!

I loved this story. I think you should continue with this story. Maybe get the teenage girl involved by having Simone make him seduce he and then bring her to Simone’s house and start making out with her on the love seat. At the end they both have much more experience and Simone offers them a chance at going with her to NY. This could be a novel, lol.

Good premise.

Somewhat over the top.

Could have slowed down with some preliminaries. She could have teased/played with his cock slowly while discussing some scene/s in his stories that she'd read.

You really need an editor/proofreader. Again you wrote LIED when you meant LAY, for example.

All the sex was overly rushed.

The rimming flew by in an apparent rush to get to her pussy. Why the rush? His tongue in her ass with his fingers strumming her pussy should have resulted in a nice screaming orgasm.

Four stars.

One of my favorites. Would love to see a sequel (or two) detailing "summer school".

Good gravy I shot like a rocket! Man that was one of the hottest stories I have ever read! Nothing sexier than a beautiful woman who loves sex and desires you!

Miss Ross is one nasty fucking cougar who looks, fucks, sucks and talks like the slut she truly is. You can practically smell her wet pussy coming off the page.

Love it!! More please!

Great Story! So, when's the second part coming out? There's a shower and then a whole summer look up to :-)

Good delicate buildup. Loved when the first sexual contact turns out to be a story, which he "accidentally" sends to her. Of course, that could be just another fiction within the story. But it's good either way.

A teacher who loves to fuck is a dream come true. I remember one in elementary school that got me hard every day.

I wish I had a teacher like her when I was in school!!❤️

The main character being a typical stud was the only thing that i wasn't a fan of. These stories are much hotter when you can make the least likely scenarios realistic. Other than that this was delicious.

Great story. If it wasn't for the editing errors it would be a 5. They need to bring their skills up a notch or two.

Great story. However, there are some serious spelling errors that "break" the flow.

Nice one,I really liked this story and it reminds me of the good old days I had.it was soo sweet.

Great story. I was seduced by a teacher my senior year of high school. Actually the librarian. It was incredible. This story made me so 🔥 hot.

Great story. Very well done. It would be even better with the help of a good editor.

Exceptional - what a neat story! Brilliant group of characters and interesting plot. Thanks for writing this story. Please choose to continue with additional chapters.

This is one of the most fantastic stories I have ever read. It's got to be every high school guy's dream to have his hottest teacher in bed. Miss Ross is incredible. I can only imagine the unbelievable summer Todd is going to have. She will teach him every way possible to satisfy and, hopefully, sexually enslave a young woman. He should have both Miss Ross and Kim over the summer; what a comparison that would be. A threesome would be wonderful to behold.

I began reading this story and thought it would be a fun twist to have a female student also salivating over the Miss Ross the same as Todd. With the female student catching Miss Ross and Todd and demanding Miss Ross treat her to the same pleasures.

FYI - I gave the story 5 STARS as it was very exciting and daring in today's crazy world. Great job!

Fire the editors. They failed.

Principle error was to misspell principal

Thanks again for another amazing & well written story. I used body lubricant and stroked myself to an intense orgasm once I got to the sex part of the story. This was really hot!

Just downright hard n dirty just how i like them ,

Thankyou for your time given to us the readers .

Great!! One of the best. Great details, just like living it!

DAMN.... DAMN...!!!! You were SOOOoooo HOTTTtttttt..!!

Not bad, but I think Miss Ross would have marked you down several points for your grammar.

Well, yes, it is a pleasant fantasy. In real life, the teacher would have been a bit rushed in wiping her ass when she had to take a dump mid-morning, well after her shower. So when she bent over to spread her cheeks and tell him to go ahead with the rim job, he would have taken one look at the chocolate factory and gotten sick as his nose approached it. He would have vomited on the floor after she reached back to grab his head and force his mouth against her chocolate-covered rosebud. Then when he was kneeling there, still retching, she would have cut a good one from the bean burritos that the cafeteria served at noon and he would have massed out, fallen forward senseless into the coolies he had tossed on the floor while she called the school yearbook photographer to come take a picture of him. Then she would have gone to her car, picked up the very nice, smart, respectful but shy kid from her other class, gone with him to her apartment, as she had been doing every Tuesday afternoon and would have sent the nice kid around the moon while this arrogant little prick lay in his own vomit.

Fantastic!!

Magnífica fantasia adolescente, seu conto me faz recordar as professoras marsavilhosas que já tive, e todas as vezes que me imaginei nos mais loucos e selvagens encontros com essas mulheres que me faziam sonhar acordado. A senhorita Ross é a professora sexy e provocativa dos sonhos, depravados e molhados sonhos. Meus Parabéns lovecraft68!

wish i could still get it up...

Sooo good. Made me think of my favorite wet dream teacher, all of 5' 100 lb or so when she started right out of college.

9 months later its basically the scene from scary movie one where they teacher holding her baby and says go to your daddy and looked at another student saying I’ll see you after class

Fuck, was this good. Hope to have a second chapter with the much awaited anal scene.

I read the story and started to hum the obvious Van Halen song. Too funny.