by S_Hollister
I agree with the previous anon. Great story but you have to continue, please!!!
SB
Loved this story and 'Working Late' and hope you add to the two. I am very intrigued to find out whether Linda is prepared to take it further with Claudia outside work, and in which capacity, as it was almost hinted at that she is a switch and turns up at that bar as a femme rather than a butch. Also she seemed to enjoy Claudia taking charge in the bedroom. Yet she also appreciated that Claudia had almost reverted to a sub in the morning by doing all those things for Linda. They really need to talk and work out the best solution on how to go forward. Maybe try a weekend together and revert back to normal during the week. But hey you are the one writing the story so please just take it in the direction you want it to go.
Rgds Al
Really well written. You are setting a very high bar; looking forward to reading more of how Claudia & Linda's complex relationship develops, as well as how it started?
Well written and flowed well from star to finish more please like all the rest said you cant leave us hanging
Very yummy indeed! It's nice to read the writing of an author that takes the time to write out the details... Very yummy details! I do hope that there's more of this story to come! Thank you!
I so love your stories and attention to detail, but two issues (NOT complaints mind you) that I noted. On a few occasions you mentioned one or the other of the characters out of context, as in Linda removing Claudia's bra allowing "Linda's" breasts to fall free. A bit confusing. I also feel this should have been included under the "Working Late" chapters. Still, excellent and left me wanting much more. Thank you.
A couple of typos and confusion over who was who but didn't detract from an excellent story.