All Comments on 'After the Flood'

by hoo_hoo_boo

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papagrizpapagrizabout 13 years ago
TERRIBLE STORY

Give up writing and try something else

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Enjoyed

Enjoyed this. Liked the way it developed a relationship that had taken a battering after a disaster.

ShiningStarrShiningStarrover 11 years ago
Bravo!

I love a little fight before fucking .... I find something like that very arousing!

Hubbys_PrincessHubbys_Princessabout 11 years ago
I really wanted to like this more.

I liked parts of this but struggled with your male character he seemed a little washy. Otherwise it was good. I think however it would have benefited from more descriptions and felt a little rushed.

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