All Comments on 'After The Party Ch. 02'

Found this chapter slightly improved over the first one. Both well written and a pleasure to read. The first one I gave a four, yet this one received five stars. Looking forward to more of these nice change of pace in describing how to seduce women.

Really enjoying these stories, keep it up!

Check consistency of names.

OK, is she Janet or Karen? Make up your mind.

Hey, no problem with a typo here and there. Makes me feel good that you are human too. I’m uncomfortable around GODS!!!!!!

As to your story line, Neil sure is COCKY..... He must be in sales and a, “

“ONE CALL CLOSER!

I still enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading Chapter 3 on my next break.

Thank you again,

Dan

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