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Click hereNot wanting Rosie to miss out, she tried to grab her friend's hand, but Pip was so tall that she couldn't reach; instead, she moved Rosie's foot to the front of his shorts and rubbed it back and forth, causing Rosie and Pip to moan into each others' mouths. Once Rosie had taken back control and established a rhythm with her foot, Maggie moved her hand back down to Pip's leg and resumed her increasingly intimate rubbing.
Soon Maggie's hand was disappearing up the leg of Pip's shorts, teasing whatever she could reach. Rosie looked to be enjoying herself as well with Pip firmly kneading her bottom. Pip himself was making a continuous rumble deep in his chest, supplemented with regular groans at shortening intervals. All at once, Pip's entire body flexed and he let out a long, low growl.
When he relaxed this time, Rosie finally broke their kiss. "My Lord," he exhaled. "That was something else. Who takes care of me after the blue shirts?" he asked rhetorically, for which he received simultaneous slaps on his inner thigh and ribs. "Hey!"
Rosie snuggled into him. "That was wonderful, Pip, thank you."
Maggie climbed up and settled herself onto his other shoulder. "Yes, Pip -- thank you."
Pip smiled. "I really don't know what you're both thanking me for, but you're very welcome." Replaying it in his head, Pip realized he'd enjoyed the entire visit, not just the therapy portion. "Rosie... Maggie? Is this a one time thing, or do you think you would both visit me again?"
"Really?" asked an excited Maggie. "You would let me come back? What about you, Rosie -- can I come back with you?"
Rosie continued to snuggle into Pip, eyes closed, looking totally content. "Absolutely. I think we make a good team."
"I agree," stated Pip.
Maggie let out an excited squeal and moved up to Pip, kissing him fiercely. Pip was surprised, but enthusiastically returned the kiss, enjoying the difference in style and approach from Rosie. Maggie was the one to break the kiss, smiling down at him. She then bent to Rosie, cupped her cheek, and kissed her friend with the same intensity she had just shown to Pip. Rosie was more surprised than Pip had been, but soon reciprocated.
Pip couldn't exactly see what was going on, but knowing what they were doing was threatening to overload his brain.
"Thank you, Rosie -- I really will be the best Second to you," said Maggie, a happy tear running down her cheek.
"I know," said Rosie as she wiped away the droplet with her finger and then brought it to her mouth. "He's not going to know what to do with us," she concluded, grinning wickedly.
"Damn straight," said Maggie.
"Wait, what's a Second?"
- COMMENTS
xhristianjalmost 2 years agoWhat's really impressive is the characters or more specifically the characterisations. I think for many fledgling authors character development is the hardest skill to acquire and develop. Maybe that's why so many stories on here are in the first person.
In its first chapters this does a great job of world building, introduces us to multiple characters and more importantly maintains its story arch and pacing and advances the story very effectively. Genuinely well done.
C_frommnalmost 2 years agoWell unlike wicked. I think everything is going well. You left off just like a Television drama leaving the Reader hanging to read more which I will do. Maybe wicked can find something more to their liking to read.
Cuthcavs55about 2 years agoI’m reading this after the re edit I believe. Shaping up to be real awesome!
wicked62over 2 years agoWow . What absolutely crap ending to a great story. Its almost as if you couldn't be bothered finishing. Oh well, you get what you pay for...
Tulipfuzzabout 3 years agoWell done! Looking forward to sequels. The set-up for sequel has been well-laid
AlwaysUnderfootalmost 4 years agoAuthor...I really appreciate the positive feedback, as well as the constructive comments that have come my way.
For those interested, the follow-up story (book) is fully drafted and going through the beta reading / editing process (special thanks to my two volunteers). The third and final installment is about 40% written, and I am planning on (re-)publishing the entire trilogy later in the year as a 300K+ word serial, with this first book revised to incorporate feedback (including much more explicit intimate scenes).
Until then,
Simon
Anonymousover 4 years agoWow, just wow. From the first page to the last I was hooked. Exciting, well thought out, well constructed and it flowed nicely, you jumped here and there in the story but it flowed so nicely. There were no stand out questions about what happened here or there, until the end, what happens next??!! Great characters and their build up, again they seemed to fit just right, nothing corny, nothing too much, the sexual component, was discreet and elegant, like a great erotic photo, you know its there even though you can't see it. Truly, well done. A couple of typos. Great length, 26 pages of nice gritty content. I don't think I was ever bored, can not wait for the next installment!
Hardrider56over 4 years agoFound this looking for good SciFi and boy did you hit it out of the park. Every interesting story line and I look forward to read more of your work. More, more, more
calbear42over 4 years agoYou are BRILLIANT! This writing has been my getaway for a few nights. Thank you.
