All Comments on 'After The Sun Rises'

As good or better than your first. Wonderful descriptions of the local and people. I have so wanted to see my own wife in this exact position, a fair redhead and a huge black man. I can't explain the erotic thoughts but there isn't any, or much jealousy, not long lasting anyway. You prefaced this story as if it was told to you by friends or someone else. It isn't the recollection of your own wife? I do hope you will write more, you have a talent. And if it is something that is true, please say so. Thank you for a nice hard on and stroking time as I pictured the events and acts in my mine. Richard

I normally don't enjoy this genre because the character of the black man is usually not developed well. But, this story-telling was different! The character of Henri was developed so well that I found myself anxious to read the next paragraph. He became a heroic figure. Will you be writing a sequal?

Thank you for your comments. I had a tremendous amount of fun writing this story. Again, I owe a great deal of thanks to Charles and Kimm for telling me of their adventure.

Fantastic!! - so few stories take the time to develop characters, tease the reader and build the momentum to the sex. Also, thank you for making the characters mature and believable. Great job!! Your other stories are excellent also. Please continue.

Spartacus

Awesome character development. Not the usual kind of inter-racial stuff I'm used to seeing. This had a black man that was much more than just a 'Big Black Cock'.

It's one of my personal favorites!!

The best story ever.thanks

Bad this ! "1*" !!

Much better than the typical wham bam thank you white bitch story. I found myself liking all three characters by the end. This is positively a 5 star story.

Typical of the tow animals low skill levels in anything. 1 star!

Very well written, not just a fuck story! True emotions shown by all parties. I would have been very proud if this had been my wife and myself!! Jim

The previous comment is not only offensive but poorly written. Are you literate, sir? If you were, you'd know that there should be an apostrophe in your "n" word and that you didn't need a space before your exclamation mark. Dumb ass!

Can't do anything right. 1 star.

A very well developed story. I enjoyed it immensely. 5 stars!

Loved seeing this couple remain that after her husband watched his wife totally give herself to her black lover in front of her husband with his loving support

I always love watching a black cock fucking my wife. Its even better when he cums inside her tight pussy. I make sure none of his cum leaks out of her pussy. Knowing that in nine months she be having a black baby.