All Comments on 'Afterglow Pt. 04'

Yet it's the author's fault because she wrote such great dialogue and creates compelling characters , I'm dissatisfied. Where's the scene when Olivia gets introduced to Elizabeth's staid parents ? No complaints about what's written. Great slapdown of horndog, grasping colleague. More specifics on why stalker is sn insufferable creep !

When does Elizabeth take on slick, amoral criminal attorney who bested her in second installment. SO many scenes rife with potential were actualized yet there's even more still unsaid. When will Olivia and Elizabeth have their first argument ...and makeup sex ? Its hard.to be patient, but this author´s literary track record shows that patience will one day be amply rewarded and then some. Full mRx

I know I will be thinking about it, about the love between Elizabeth and Olivia, about the madman Dan (GITM has created a monster). He is so scary because GITM has so artfully shown not only what he has done, but how what he has done effects the people he has done things to: I have hardly ever before felt so much hate for a Literotica character.

This amazing story defies my best efforts to sing its praise. The tension is palpable, the love is touching. The writing is very, very special,

The very best, the very best that Literotica has to offer!

Once more, we are left at the utter mercy of Girlinthemoon's mastery in character play and action. The plot moves along faster than you notice and the words jump out of the screen at you.

I go days thinking of each Chapter after I've read it. This story is so intriguing that it just takes its time floating thorough my mind. When a new Chapter is up, it takes a moment to recall just how good it has been and seemingly the new Chapter is over and new thoughts permeate my mind, so delicious, so sexy and so dramatic. Characters are built with bricks and mortar, strong and unyielding from Elizabeth to the Stalker Dan. I generally prefer stories that have a few chapters then a nice ending, somehow I want more then a few more Chapters, even though I sense that the ending when it comes will come with mixed emotions, perhaps even an ending I would prefer not to see, but will see it and devour it like the rest of this tale. You do not need anyone to speak to your capability, either technical or dramatic but I will commend both. Looking forward to more, while relishing what I have now. Thank you Miss Moon - Kevin

I see Oscars all around once the movie's made - so much raw emotion, from the protagonist, Olivia, the monster, and even the supporting cast (Rose & Felicity, and even the monster's mother - for such a small part she was also well written ).

Publish, I'll buy it.

It is the first one I read. This story is amazing and so well developed. I go back and re-read the previous chapters before reading a new post. I love your work!

Nothing bad. Nothing bad. It'll be fine *rocks back and forth wrapped in a blanket*

Such amazing work wow cant stop reading. Hoping pt. 05 comes sooooon pretty please!

But please post the next chapter soon. Pretty please?

I enjoy ed this story but why why why do I end up waiting on the next chapter!!!! Haha no but seriously great read looking fwd to the next installment!!!

when i first started reading this today i thought it was one of those ones that just never finished and i got really angry after i reached the end. now i see its pretty new and now i'm hopeful you'll finish it! yay! finish it!

I like this story......believable and totally real. Good work too! please post again soon?

Addictive stuff, sigh, now waiting for the next submission.

Please never ever stop writing! We definitely need part 5!

Hahahah whoops, just saw that there is a fifth part

this has me on the edge of my seat, this is a very good story

Another great chapter, gets better with every part, carn't wait to read pt5.

You do a great job! Not only writing about love, romance and sex, but letting us readers feel very good how it feels to be harrassed and the impact it has on one's life.

But I have things to do!

And this is nowhere near what I usually read on this site!