All Comments on 'Afternoon Delight'

love the very hot horny story, brilliant story fantastic writing so very erotic , reading this was like watch it all taking place. awesome more of your very erotic stories please

It is refreshing to read a story that is grammatically correct and yet has creative sentence structure etc. The writing style is innovative and original. It was an easy and enjoyable read. The story was fun to read and exciting too. I want to congratulate the author on her writing skills. There is so much atrocious writing here that when one sees something that is first, well written and second, is a good story, it's worth noting.

Well-written and very, very hot. Nicely done!

I read the story and it drew me in making me feel part of the experience. I was aching by the end

you are like Francesca...you never fail to please! well done!!

david xxxxx

Lust4Sure:

A very well-written story till the bottle was shoved into her pussy. A turn-off for myself. Pussies are meant for one thing; fucking and eating.

Though Francesca is a young woman, she is a mature woman nonetheless. She is extremely hot and already primed for a fucking romp. The breast size is a little big for my taste while fitting into the story. A woman my grandmother would have called buxom.

I must admit I'm primed for part two.

Lust4Sure

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