All Comments on 'Afternoon Delight'

Look forward to more installments. A 5 for sure

Can't wait to read moar!

Having such a high ranking and positive feedback has been so gratifying! I really do appreciate everyone whose read, voted, and commented!

If not the very best I've read for as long as I can remember.

The dialog is great--so very authentic. The action exquisitely described and the incestuous surprise made it a pure delight to read,

Usually I don't love incest stories but I am curious right off the back and you didn't disappoint!! It wasn't over done that they are father and son which made it enjoyable for me! It was a great read I am looking forward to more of your work.

Enjoyed your story. Especially well phrased for a first time effort. Your witty dialogue and nicely paced action made Rod and Dan even greater wet dream teases. Impressive class displayed giving your editor Cam such special praises.

well crafted and very interesting especially for a first attempt. Am looking forward to more of your stories.

I have a bit of an underwear and swimwear fetish, so really got into this one. Nicely done.

Sorry. I did read ahead and honestly adored the Lorenzo connection - the feelings and emotions are as real as those I was amazed and bewildered to share with the best male partner I believe will ever exist ... for Me! You captured it perfectly, the expectation, the suspense, the ever thrilling climb to each new summit and the sweet, caring attention from an experienced lover who knows the journey is the treasure, more than one last blast of fireworks. I'd enjoy knowing the person who crafted these two scripts. Every reader should hope to achieve such a journey with his, or her, special soul mate.