All Comments on 'Afternoons with Mrs. K Ch. 02'

by Jay_Lloyd

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Brenda_ONeilBrenda_ONeilover 19 years ago
Beautifully Drawn

This is what mature women need.

In 'her' tale, I could almost see myself as Mrs K.

Unlike in many stories, the characters' are explored and seem believable, and HOT.... Bring on part 3 soon!

jasper_zehrjasper_zehrover 19 years ago
Great....

Great stuff. This has a good, realistic ongoing plot with plenty of hot fucking. Will the son join in the fun next? A top example of the pleasure a young man and older woman can have together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful

This story reminds me of myself. I am a mature lady who loves younger men and I can relate to this very much. I wish you the best in your future writings. You seem to be a very nice young man.

Beverly

Foo FighterFoo Fighterover 19 years ago
Your way with words is breath taking.

Your an awsome story teller, i look forward to reading more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Story

I Have Much Same Thoughts As Hazel Since Younger Men/Older Women Is Soo In Vogue. Part 3 Please

moonshadow14moonshadow14over 19 years ago
Mrs K...so lucky is she!

Loved part 2 as much as part 1. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
even flow

I liked the steady flow to your writing... very erotic style... more please....

bornagainbornagainalmost 17 years ago
A Very Moving Story

Jay_Lloyd you keep writing more about Hazel and I`ll keep reading them great work .

I spent three and a half years in England as a young boy my dad was in the Navy there when he was in the Navy as a Lt jg

i went to school there in Surrey.

Pat

OscineMajorOscineMajorover 7 years ago
Brautiful Discriptions

Both Chapters 1 & 2 are very good stories. I haven't yet read Chapter 3, and look forward to it. The very detailed descriptions might seem a bit too long and detailed at times; but they ultimately do an excellent job of expressing the wonder & excitement of both lovers. The almost indefinable line between "sex" and "love" is approached for each of them. One is a youth with probably very diverse sexual experiences. The other is a mature woman who possibly has much more knowledge of showing & expressing physical love. Both stories deserve top ratings. I look forward to Chapter 3.

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