by BACarter
These writers are so pathetic. I hope they get the therapy they so badly need.
Yessss! If only my wife, after our threesomes with a young American student guy a few years back, would go this far with a suitable successor to him!
A fantasy to be savoured by those that way inclined. The rest may go read something else.
To the homophobic reviewer, you need help for your wimpy comment. Attacking the authors or readers is an example of your own sexual insecurity and immaturity.
It's a pleasure to find a very good writer of these stories.
I am amazed with your ability to create such an engaging, interesting, erotic story in so few words. I found myself filling in the unspoken elements, especially what was likely going on in the mind of the young man. You are definitely a very talented writer.
fantastic story - my wife & I do that too - great to hear of a story like ours
What a great story. I would love to participate in a night like that with my wife.
I love the stories where the wife is the aggressor as she seek out her prey and encourages her husband and the newbie into satisfying themselves.. Often, all that is needs is for the husband to feel his wife's encouragement.
This has potential, but ... it's just a sketch. Just blocking and action, with no character. Who are these people? How do they feel about what they are doing?
All it takes is for one eager woman to create boys who will bend in every direction. Too bad there are so few women with these desires.