All Comments on 'Agent of S.T.A.L.K. in Prague'

you got the ending completely perfect. this is a really, really good story.

You forgot the important rule though. The succubus should always win. :D. Good luck in the contest!

Although this story was a little long I did enjoy it. Good luck in the contest.

I did not expect to read a story of that caliber. Usually I get fed up with all the bad grammar. I enjoyed the story line very much, and that was a great twist at the end. Good job!

One day they'll make a movie about this!

You did an awesome job capturing the "noir" feel of pulp stories. The details and plot elements you use really make this story interesting. The only slightly weird thing was the thesaurus-itis you had... a few words really stood out a awkwardly (like "tumescence"). The dictionary definitions match, but the words did not go with the rest of the story. Other than that, though, I LOVED it. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

that was great, it had everyhting i like ..from the vamp theme,great sex,detective/mystery story, all the way to the end, with a want for more on mercers past and to find his daughter...cant wait for more...great job

Great storyline!

Great story. Really liked the physical description of the first girl and it was a terrific, well designed ending. FYI, Czech and Slovak are two different languages (though close).