by hero101
Uhhhm, I know its kinda unrelated but are you dropping Work and Play? I'm still faithfully waiting for Gabe and Zeke. Sorry if this comment annoys you :)
between addicted and heartbroken... I love the writing style, I find it very engaging.
Please let me know if there is a way to be notified when you post updates!
Excellent work, different from 'Work and Play' but same amazingly great way of writing. Updates on both stories would be highly appreciated.
Some of the best Gay stories I've read on here! Look forward to more too
This Matt guys sounds like a NIGHTMARE. This story could easily suck me in but Matt p*sses me off already. I don't like self destructive users. But of course good writing style etc, just my pref!
Very inventive storytelling and strong character development. Don't know if you edit yourself but in three installments I found only one minor mistake ('to' where you intended 'too'). That's pretty remarkable! I can't seem to comb my own writing so finely and it takes me a re-submission or two to finally get my errors edited out. Sure hope a new installment is in the offing.
I never post comments... I guess now I have to say I almost never post comments to these stories, but I have to admit I'm dying for the next chapter. There is so much character development that I'm truly blown away.
I'm dying to read the next chapter. So much character development, so involving, so well written. I just wanna say that i love it. Please, pleeease keep updating it.
Uhhhhhh this is awesome, and I'd love to read more. Seriously good stuff. Love the characters, and the romantic progression is very engaging (not to mention the sex).
I really despise it when I'm horny but then end up finding stories that make me want to skip the sex scenes so I can get more character plot. And it's even worse when I read all of the chapters in one sitting only to find that the story isn't complete and hasn't been updated in THREE YEARS. I really liked your story and know you'll prolly never read this, but I want you to know I think you're a great writer and I would love more, even though it probably will never come.
On an unrelated note, was Maggie's cat just, wandering about Matt's house the whole time they were having sex in the next room?
Not to nag, but since you’ve continued your work on Work and Play, maybe you might consider finishing off this storyline too? I’d really like to know what happens with these characters as well. I really love your story progression and character development and it made me so sad when you left.
I've never left a comment on any story before, this is really exceptional. I hope you find the inspiration to continue with these characters.
I just read the 3 chapters in one setting! This is a very interesting, unusual story, this violent painful abusive sex is something I can't understand!
Its obvious these two characters, Wes and Matt have very strong chemistry, the sex is so passionate, even though it would be considered abusive by most!
I hated the ending with the baby and Matts girlfriend, it felt like Matt was giving Wes one last rough fuck, just the way he craves it! The girlfriend and little girl are certainly a strange twist! It sucked that Matt got tangled up with Wes, just as the girlfriend and baby come into play! Not likely there will be anything more here between the two hot main characters!
It seems the writer has not posted for a while, but please continue this story, it is so well written it deserves a good conclusion! Not likely a happy ending for these two screwed up main characters, it would certainly be awesome if it could have a happy conclusion and these two could find some healing and comfort together!
Plain and simple, this story deserves to be on shelves where the characters are fully fleshed out. However, I’m grateful it’s here! But I would still pay to read this, you deserve to be compensated for this story. I’m going through so many emotions while reading it, the mark of a truly good story.