All Comments on 'Agreeing with My Wife'

too long and drawn out, didn't finish it.

It would have been a great story if you hadn't kept switching the names in the wrong places and mixing up the women's names, it took a lot out of the story trying to figure out who was doing what. You need to proofread better and edit it better, sorry but that earned you a one star vote.

Way too fucking long. There's no need for a story to be this long; holy moly

Damn good read.

Holy. Fuck.

Hot!

Great story but a little slow in the first half for my liking. Also, check the names again. Sometimes you wrote Alice when you meant Rachel and vice versa

So I really liked this story and it's incredibly well-written, but I couldn't help but notice that the seduction -- especially the wife's attitude and even some of the things she says and how she says them -- are beat-for-beat identical to the back half of "My Niece Comes to Stay" by JK1979.

Also, there's the implication (in both stories) that, since the wife is infertile and she's encouraging the protagonist to finish inside his relative (daughter here, niece there), that she's interested in him impregnating her, but that's not really addressed. This left me feeling a bit teased, and not in the fun way -- and also drew my attention to the similarity between the stories.

So what's up with that?

Very nice read! Obviously you have set this story up to continue with at least a couple more chapters. Please do not keep us waiting very long for the next installment..

Thank you for sharing.

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

The story would of been perfect with daughter having a bun in the oven at the end.

In AA we are all responsible for working our own program, and not to compare with others, BUT. I started reading and was on the second page when it didn't make sense to me if your character is in recovery. We are not saints, but if I'm paying attention to the 12 steps, well the story was becoming uncomfortable. Only reason I'm putting this on the message board so others are not misinformed how the AA program works

Echo sentiments on quality etc. Just a pity there were scant info on the ex's love life etc. after the divorce.

LOVED this story. Very well written. Kept me hard while reading it.

Wonderfull story, good buildup, loved the ending. You should try and get it illustrated, i'm sure plenty of others would agree.

Keep it up. 🙂

A little kong for me, but it kept sucking me in. The entire story was excellent.

Cool story liked it a lot, but I would make it shorter and less descriptive add more hot parts... Loved Alice !! She's like the mom and the bitch ... Rachel is very naughty also .. keep up good job!!

Great story. My only issue is that there were times when Alice and Rachel’s names were switched and it got a little confusing. Still def 5 stars!

The last two pages could do with some revisions. The sex between Mark and Rachel happened too fast, IMHO. I think it needed a bit more of a run up. I liked the story. The premise and the length was the best part. Well done. Salute.

The story was really good, a fine build up and not too long and not too short. But it really needs a correction reading. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes and switching of the names. That makes it sometimes hard to read.

And, for me in Rachel‘s position, you fucked up totally, when you met her the first time at the door. „Hi, I‘m your dad, here is a money, good bye“ was the worst you ever could have done. Emotions ALWAYS come first! Money, in this situation, is the absolutely last.

And, totally off topic, I will never understand, why such a rich country like the USA, doesn’t have a better healthcare system. That a health insurance is not mandatory. Even many countries in Asia are in a better position in that.

Sorry, I don’t want to start a political discussion. It’s only my opinion.

I dug it mostly, im sfraid the name mix ups cost you a star though.

I wanted more. Liked it. 5s

Very hot stuff and a good plot. Didn't really like the Alice character. She was manipulating the entire time. Glad the story had a happy ending. Thanks for writing and sharing this story. 4*

Muy buena historia, adictivamente insinuante y con desenlace caliente.

Kudos. What's not to like?

I had to leave the story at the hotel.