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nyx21nyx21about 4 years ago

Loved it and happy to see you back

sparktjsparktjabout 4 years ago

A superb piece of writing, thoroughly enjoyable. I got halfway through it, found myself very aroused, so had to put my iPad down and turn to my wife. Thankfully she was receptive and we enjoyed a gorgeously dirty early-morning fuck. We always enjoy morning sex but this was even more intense than usual thanks to your excellent story-telling and it’s effect on my erection. I gave her such a deep pounding and she’s now sleeping it off while I get ready for work. Thank you!

MkalfredmcMkalfredmcabout 4 years ago

Two great stories in the last week! Thank you for reminding me why you are a favorite author. It’s almost time to go back and read your submissions all over again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Definitely more nautical naughtiness please - loved it

Great opener for a developing story. What a lucky lad is Sam!!

Storyteller0112Storyteller0112about 4 years ago
Indeed, welcome back!

Like many others here, I have missed your submissions and imagination. Thank you for this first installment!

barbianbarbianabout 4 years ago
great

Great story line please do a sequel

TornConflictTornConflictabout 4 years ago

Excellent! Lots of fun! Clear where the story was going but in the best kinda way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great fun, great read

Let’s have some more!

maddictmaddictabout 4 years ago

Sailing away

Shiver me timber. I always wondered how that saying came about.

I'm in agreement with you, we need more lessons

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 4 years ago

Fucking hot! Can't wait to see what happens next! Five stars and a favorite point!

BBeinhartBBeinhartabout 4 years ago
Haha!

So fucking sexy and so fucking hot!!! Good sailing details as well! What’s not to like?

💥💥💥💥💥💫🙌🏻😜

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
cliff hanger

You can be the best writer on here, but if you leave me hanging I'll never read your stuff again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Boats

I have always dreamed of having a boat, and finding a place to anchor where you could spend the entire day naked, swimming, eating, etc. Ticked all my boxes. Thank you, and yes please, do continue...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Can't beat the older woman teacher.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hos on boats

Awesome

thekeenreaderthekeenreaderabout 4 years ago

Would love to hear more from these characters

CreepythinmanCreepythinmanabout 4 years ago
Welcome back

Been a whike since you posted and as usual, you did not disappoint. Really looking forward to hearing more from Sam, Rose & Wendy. Oh, and please make sure Jayne regrets everything! Hahaha!

PantricePantriceabout 4 years ago
Nice!

OMG would be so funny if they cuck the daughter!

SorchakSorchakabout 4 years ago
Just my opinion,

but I think the best way for Jayne to find out about Sam and Wendy would be for her to come home from a date with Mitch, or whatever his name is, and find them fucking on a lounger by the pool, with Wendy riding him. Or even better, with Wendy on her knees worshipping Sam's cock with her mouth, and Jayne gets to see how much Wendy can take.

stevie1965stevie1965about 4 years ago

great story, really enjoyed the characters. Looking forward to chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Next installment?

I loved this story and can't wait for the next installment. I hope it will not be a long wait.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 4 years ago
Arrrr maties

Funny story, some good sex and a little sailing. What more could a guy ask for. Cracked me up when Sam said to "Man the lifeboats. She's sprung a leak! " Looking forward to more stories of the good ship Big Boobs.

ashleycooperashleycooperabout 4 years ago
great start!

Can't wait to see the next installment.

SsnowmannSsnowmannabout 4 years ago
Outstanding, more please!

This story is the best I have read in quite a long time. I join the choir asking for this to be the start of a lengthy series! There is a great opportunity to develop these characters as they navigate both non-sexual and sexual adventures.

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceabout 4 years ago
Oh, I *definitely* want to hear what a cheat says...

when she finds out she definitely got the short end of the stick...

Just hope he never is foolish enough to forgive her... eatcha heart out, Jayne...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Most definitely need more of this story.

Stillness1977Stillness1977about 4 years ago
5 stars

Thanks -- this is one of the best MILF stories I've ever read. I hope you'll publish chapter 2 soon!

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycabout 4 years ago
Hot and arousing

Thank you for a great story. Great story, great pace, great sex! More, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sailing lessons??

Not a bad story, but you are clearly NOT a sailor. Casting off, with no sails up, and the engine not even running?

Gogetit52Gogetit52about 4 years ago
Great Mature Story

PLEASE provide another chapter. You have a talent in setting up the scene that takes your stories to another dimension. Well done...another please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
AUNTIES PANTIES

Great story.

PS. Could you finish the aunties panties installments 😅

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Let her see

Let that raggedy bitch see it. Make her cry about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Enjoyable read

As always a wonderfully erotic story from a gifted author. We as readers are very fortunate that you freely share the fruits of your labor. Thank you for all of your fantastic stories!

Ravey19Ravey19almost 4 years ago
Wonderful, Just Wonderful

A tad short for me but still action packed. Well written as usual. Def 5 stars. Look forward to more adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful story.....and nautically accurate as well......

Enjoyed every word.......and sure wish I had had that luck growing up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

More, more, more :)))

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Turn the lust into love a happy ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story

Enjoyed the story. Would have been good to include a segment where Jayne finds out / regrets what she gave up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Would there be a second part??

Looking forward to one. Please consider writing the next part.

RRC2RRC2about 3 years ago

Great story. The author takes a wonderful attitude in his storytelling, making the thing so much better. I'm a fan for sure.

THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story, really good buildup and satisfying outcome- how about a sequel with Rose, or both her and Wendy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

As of now this is the last thing you uploaded to Literotica, more than a year and a half ago. You've got so many wonderful stories on here, yet incomplete, including this. I hope one day you come back to finish them

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This young man needs to show the older ladies how to use the lines on the boat, rip up the sheets, do lashings, shiver their timbers and do lots of splicing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

good!...

Cuthcavs55Cuthcavs55over 2 years ago

Really wish this would be continued. Love this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Outstanding. Can't wait for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Definitely worthy of additional episodes!! 5/5

nyteramblernyteramblerover 1 year ago

Shit wish next chapter was written lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I would just LOVE to be a fly on the wall when Wendy tells Rose's daughter how she screwed down , good story and hurry up with the sequel .

goodshoes2goodshoes2over 1 year ago

Wish you would add additional chapters. 5 stars.

LambchopCALambchopCAabout 1 year ago

Maybe picking nits, but I wouldn't want Sam piloting my yacht. Casting off before getting the diesel started? He'd be in bad shape if it failed and he drifted into something hard, or worse, expensive. Killing the engine before getting sails up? Yeah, let's just let the boat drift side-on to the waves and roll horribly... get both of the ladies seasick right away and maybe do some damage to the masts and rigging. That sort of destroyed immersion there and I couldn't go on.

mcrr2225mcrr222512 months ago

Yes indeed, please more! This is another fun read. I like the way you add some humor to the sex. Please, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Still waiting for more nautical naugtiness to cum, er, come...

ehppmsehppms3 months ago

Looking forward to reading further adventures of this threesome.

beerman6501beerman65012 months ago

This was a very hot story and definitly deserves at least one followup.

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