by Boxtears
Togruta dont have lekku, thats the Twileks. Togruta have montrals. Your story sucks, and not in the way that I want Ahsoka to do to me!
I agree the last 2. Well thought out with the whole "commune with the force" thing. Keep it up!
I feel compelled to agree with another here who who offered words to the effect that this sucks. Chapter one was great in every way, but this chapter is inherently flawed.
I'm sorry, but this chapter sucked. The first chapter was okay, but this one was ultra messed up, because it was forced instead of consentual and it was so off-putting to read that I almost didn't finish reading. The only reason I finished reading it was out of pure curiousity and the need to finish things I started but this fanfiction is too rough and honestly too assaulty for my tastes. I rate this a 0/10 because it was non consentual and wasn't tagged as such. It would be one thing if I were in the tag for non con and read this but this wasn't in that section. Very disappointed. If you ever release another chapter it would be better if the characters did things consentually.