All Comments on 'Aiden'

Great story, really enjoyed reading it, can't wait to read more of your work =)

xxElle

Such a short story but filled with such love and emotion and drama that made it the little gem it is. Hope to read more from you soon.

Well written, erotic, dramatic and an overall good read. Thank you!

Read all of your submissions tonight. God! You do good stuff. This is the first time I have ever marked someone as a favorite author the first time I read him (her). I'm ready for more as soon as you can dish it out. You are really good! I mean, really!

You sure had a way with words in this one and it was excellent! Not vanilla at all.

The Betsy Ross part made me LOL. As usual, hot sex scenes.

Fantastic.

you are so talented!!!!! absolutely love the story!!!!

Okay, so I fucking love your writing style. I don't really know what it is but it made the whole story very real. Possibly the sarcasm and the sometimes short elliptic sentences. Either way- awesome work and the sex was so hot and inspite of the length of the story you created two well-rounded, realistic characters.

This is one of my favourite stories on here. You just made me fall in love with both of the characters. Absolutely loved the sarcasm and the taunting that in no way disguised the real affection but just added to it. Your writing style suits these two brilliantly. Perfect!

so heres the thing im really of two minds about this story. because on the one hand i didnt like that he took him back so easily after he hit him but on the other hand i really liked the story and how it turned out so.. yeah .. anyways liked the story :)

That's all.

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Hope you write new story :)

This was great. I love how you started it then went back in time to how they met and became a couple then came back to the present. Just brilliant. It was so intense, so emotionally wrenching to read. Loved it!!

Humorous, hot and an interesting plot. On the other hand, I wish we could have seen more of their relationship together besides a few sentences tying first to last. And changing the name of Win's friend from Mike to Matt is just bad editing.

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time! I absolutely loved it. Keep up the amazing stories. :)

This story will always be one of my favourites. Explosively hot! Searingly beautiful.

i enjoyed this alot. i have to say that at the start I was a bit put off by aiden slapping him. im heavily against domestic violence. But, Win had needled him enough over the years that I might understand his smacking him. afterall, Win admits he constantly fought for the making-up and it's a story, so I got past it. I only would have enjoyed a bit more of their lives together, either in college or after, but all around, good story.

Great writing and plot! Aiden confessing how long he's loved Win was my favorite part!

I loved this story

This is head and shoulders above the amateurish and cliched Unrequited. Wow. It's like two different people wrote them. This one is fast-paced and written well - and it's hot.

What a wild ride! Powerful, painful, beautiful.