by StangStar06
3 Stars as he had the kids to worry about . .. And all She thought about was b3eing fanouts . Heck she left her kids for what she thought she deserved in life
This was very lengthy, more than was necessary. I can’t believe it took her months or weeks to figure out Steve. The trouble with most of the stories in L. W. is that they revolve around a totally stupid bitch. I just don’t see that many totally stupid woman. But then I’m in a different social circle than many I know.
Oh, well. It’s just fiction. 4 stars.
Bill S.
I liked the Sylina and Josh aspect. That was a nice romance. But wow thr parts with Val were tedious, her thinking was stupid and irrational and she just grated on my nerves. And the legal shenanigans seemed implausible and artifical to force an extension to the story. Val was a nutjob.
I am really liking the way you write these LW stories.
The men are men, not some wuss, but at the same time will give all their heart and trust into the relationship. Afterwards they man up and do it to it.
I laughed my ass off at the Femsom agitprop joke about women having a greater capacity for forgiveness. Ha! Good one.
Ah, Val. The perfect combination of stupidity and narcissistic evil. A LW icon that we can love to hate. Bonus- she’s made of indestructible plastic polymers! Great read.
This was a great and complete story of this clan. Valerie died a bitter and sad woman who realized she had it all and just threw it all away to rejoin Steve on his rock tour. This was a great story and I give it 5 stars.
I'll have to admit after the LONG ASS intro, Valerie's outrageous heel turn scarred me deeply. I absolutely was floored and I was CERTAIN that she was going to have some sort of mental illness.