All Comments on 'Akeldama'

You have the beginning of a great story can't wait to see where it goes. Thank you for writing

Enjoyed the new story.

Started off not really into this on the first page and a half or so but after that it was really easy to enjoy and route for Connor. Look forward to part 2.

Please re-edit this story to correct several minor errors, mainly hyphenation where unnecessary.

Can't wait for more of your new story!!

Well done...

This is brilliant, first started reading this I had Meatloafs ‘I would do anything for love’ in my head..

If you haven’t already, I would recommend reading Averagejoe1992 - Fear stories, they could give you another insight into the vampire world that isn’t widely explored.

Again, you bought us a great story but my favourite will always be Silverwind saga.

Great read so thanks for that can't wait for more

Great read. Can't wait for part 2

however, what’s up with all the misplaced hyphens? Was that a copy/paste or formatting issue that didn’t get caught? Still voted 5 stars, just curious.

I believe that the hyphens are there to denote a speech pattern. Connor is far older that those that are around him now and this differentiates the way he talks from the rest of the nobles.

I like it. Looking forward to part 2

I am a sucker for a good vamp. saga. Keep it coming. I hope you are well during these uncertain times.

Truly good character development, attention to detail is stunning. I am happily awaiting more of this gift. Please carry on with this story line.

Please give us a sequel to this story, I know a writer has to have the urge to write a specific story or sequel. You have given us many great stories here and on smash words, also still checking every other day to see if The Darkest Hour sequel has been posted.

We need more, please we need a part 2

Second read and even better this time round look forward to it continuing.

Please give us the 2nd part.

This story too good to be stopped by now. Please continue to 2nd part

Just read again preparing for the next part!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Just read this. Looking forward to part 2.

Like the the first part can not wait for part two.

I may be late to the party but, this is a great story all around. The heart ache, the betrayal, the revenge, all so compelling. I love your story telling, all of them. This is a departure from your other stories but, a very welcome one.

More please

Soul you are the goat every story is good

It was going great until he got capture again. I hated it.

Can you please give us another chapter

Amusing, not bad.

There are more hunters than strigoi in Transilvania, I should know.

But, it just fantasy, right?

C

Great story - please do continue it. Would love to see how this develops....

Many thanks :)

I love your writing, but it is very frustrating to read multiple stories that are unfinished.

How long does it take to swap these story it says you upload but I can't tell

However long, it takes Lit to approve it. I know, I've been waiting five days for them to approve it. But once they do it will replace it instantly once its published to their server.

Well, it seems Lit doesn't see edited versions as a priority, so I cannot tell you how long it will take for them to finally publish it.

Thanks soul71 for the info

hey can you just post this story as a new one because its been taking way too long for them to approve the story

For those asking for me to upload it as a new story, they first would have to take down the old one, which take a week or more, then it would have to go through the approval process all over again, that would be another week given how they've been with my other stories. So, you'd still be looking at a month as it seems they're taking their precious time in approving. If you all want it faster, I suggest emailing the admins of this site, given how they were the ones that told me it wasn't a priority to them.

@ Soul71

It comes out when it comes out. The fact you finished it is what I am thankful for.

Soul71 thank for information.

Wow, so many twists. Love this story. Hopefully you will write a sequel!

Wow I really enjoyed that can't wait for more

Thanks for sharing.

Great story, wondering if your going to add sequels and include this story line in with Porn Star family, Pharaoh's Curse, and so on. Could truly be interesting to see.

If you do a sequel will it tie in with Porn Star Family and Family Secrets? Does look like Connor will need help to defeat his Mum & Sin.

Also again, great work as usual.

Thank you for this wonderful story. Hoping there will be more to it, but enjoyed what you have written immensely.

Outstanding as always

Great continuation of the story originally posted. Have been looking forward to this and now I'm looking forward to more of Connor. Please keep them coming

Long story, but well worth it.

Is there a sequel to this?

What a great read!! I would love to see a second version expanding on the tale!!

Cool!!!

Not really that into Vampires; but a true lover of history... And, somehow, you have woven a tale that includes both to my amazing pleasure!!! Very Well Done...

I remember when you listed this on your Biography folder about a year ago indicating additional parts, then it suddenly disappeared. I thought you had changed your mind and simply moved on to continue other stories. So, imagined my surprised when I opened this up to read it again and found new pages. Of course, you moved in a direction I wasn't expecting like all great authors. I lost another night of sleeping catching up. Great stuff. Grouch6977

I would love to see a sequel to this. Great story.

Cool story. Can be a stand alone, does leave the door open to further adventures with Conner & Co.

I'm with a couple of the other commenters here and wondering if this somehow ties in to your shared PFSU.

Fantastic!

Great story. Can't believe I've only just found this story. Hope you can find time amongst all your other stories to write another chapter to finish this one.

Would love to see a follow up to this

Hey Soul71....any chance of a part 2?

Thank you for all the work that went into this. A great read!