All Comments on 'Alan Goes to Sea'

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ArediaArediaover 5 years ago

That was lovely. Touching, in all the right ways. I think it could almost have been a Romance, but for their inevitable and permanent parting. Thank-you for a great story.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 5 years ago
Another good Alan story.

It feels like there is more life in this story line. I would love to read another about his travels. Thanks

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
Sea story

Great little sea story! Certainly more believable than that stupid love boat tv show. Hope to read more of Alan's adventures in future stories. Five stars, and thank you for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ships in the night

Well done! Just enough sex and tickle to make things work. Story line and ship information provided were an added treat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Alan does a great service to humanity

not only to the women he meets, but also to give men a good name.

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