All Comments on 'Alana's Playtime'

Good job as usual! You seem to have a large ensemble of characters to populate your stories.

5

I liked this story as I do with all of your writings, but in this case it seems like there isn´t enough information given on the characters and story feels incomplete.

I've been feeling down this week, RBC is low again and I need more whole blood.

Then I saw a new story and it is like a tonic to revive me. Thank you so much for your stories and the name drop of your new town. I eagerly await your next work. 5*

Fantastic as always! Great story. Five stars! Thanks for sharing your work with us.

A fun read

lol weird this story was in my new story page but ur LW story wasnt some weird stuff going on, on this site

Interesting to see so many familiar names in this one. There is a lot of creativity in here, as well as a pretty sweet little story.

"Teach these things how to take out the garbage, my husband's ass would be out the door," You are always good for a laugh out loud moment JimBob44. Swear to gawd.

Kept me entertained and smiling at the end! Incredible how many characters and names pulled from other stories- has to be a record amount of crossover! Overall well worth reading!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading!

I come back to read this one every once in a while, It always amuses me. I love all of your sto

ries.

Enjoyed this one