All Comments on 'Alarm Call'

My passion!

I love the build up literally & figuratively. The sensuousness, the continual terms of endearment, patience, and care is love personified.

Oh hon, you are really gifted with that ability to write stories like this one. *applause*

Great way to wake up and very well written. Very poetic and sensual. I look forward to reading your other stories.

Excellent