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by vkdrake

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joosforchambersjoosforchambersalmost 3 years ago

Ok... What the hell was that?

grampaaloisiusgrampaaloisiusover 2 years ago

If it takes only 2 minutes in a erotic story and they have sex something is wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What the hell was that it was poorly written bad story line and made damn since he would have been dead before even getting to the wolf cubs and they supposedly had no contact with the outside world meaning she would have been a Vergin yet she didn't feel any pain the first time not even in a fantasy is that going to happen I have seen bad stories posted on here but damn this was the worst by a long shot

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I'm an up-and-coming self-publisher who specializes in suspense with a strong forbidden element.