All Comments on 'Alberta'

That was a great story. Looking forward to the mom and Judy getting together

Now it's up to the son to get his own back on his mother for her grammar correction on the front page. He'll fuck her up the arse while teaching her the difference between lay and lie.

Love and sex between mother and son is always a hot topic. Erotic writing about incest is one of the most erotic genre to read and this author has a way with words that spark excitement in the reader.

Thanks for the very good story.

A great story. Keep writing!

Good Story

I really enjoyed the story. Hope you expand the story by having the family involved in different adventures.

It took me a while to understand what was going at the beginning. But eventually it turned out to be a pretty good story.

please continue this story

I cant wait to see daddy pounding Judy's hot little cunt.

I cant wait to see daddy pounding Judy's hot little cunt.

...you must continue with Blake fucking Judy--that's the kind of incest that I love--siblings fucking!

Its a great story and well written. I would love to read more about this family.

plz more dialogue 4/5

This was a fun (and erotic) story. It's always nice when a mother steps in to help her kids.

fun read! Thanks for posting it!

Great story, hope you add to it. Read your bio; gonna take a shot. I think you're a woman 37-45 yrs of age. Highly educated with a masters, maybe even a PHD. Your perspective from the Mother is spot on, makes me think you have to be a mother yourself: also you only said the word "cunt" once in the story. A man would'nt do that. Then again, I've been wrong 3 or 9 times.,so I know that my opinion and six dollars will get me a pack of cigarettes.lol

I loved the story....

I like this get the whole family involved. Not just the mom & he loser son mad at the dad or out to cuckold him for no reason. Great job I enjoyed this story.

Enjoyed this story very much! I hope you continue with the backstory on how Judy, Dad and Bro got to fucking each other! I also think that the ladies should go off the pill and get themselves knocked up.

So exciting. I hope you continue the chapter with some humor and teasing about sniffing worn panties and musky pussy and they laugh about it. Also they go on vacation on a nudist beach.

Quite original and fun to read, not to mention very hot! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work.

I too read your bio and you won hands down. Sometimes you were female, other times male which of course raises the need of 5 * as due payout for an excellent story.

You must've used the word "assured" a thousand goddamn times.

Get a thesaurus.

Silly, childish, and predictable . . . .