All Comments on 'Alcohol Stupid'

Decent story. Not sure if it is worth fixing the relationship. The both have way too much competitiveness, and instead of supporting each other that bet was a road to disaster.

Alison sounds like a psychotic b***h. If there are couples this competitive, risking their marriage in incredibly stupid bets to see who has pick-up sex first, they need their heads examined! Jeff was dumb and drunk, obviously he has a drinking problem as he is much smarter when sober. The thing is as he sobered up his brain re-engaged and he pulled back from the brink immediately texting his wife. His wife on the other hand, being as drunk as her husband Jeff, ignored any signs of sobering up. She did not give pause to her actions and repercussions. Alison enjoyed the cheat with Brent, repeatedly throwing it up to Jeff and continuously rubbed it in his face! They both committed grave errors in judgment but Alison forgot she had a husband. Alison forgot she made a vow to love, honor and cherish him. Jeff seems to have remembered his vows to Alison and went beyond that to include Denise in the unspoken vow that one human treat another human with dignity and respect. This story is actually a good wake up call for people who tend to "over lubricate" their lives. It ends up causing problems. - TANSTAAFL

Let's see here...she cheats on him, rubs it in his face with e-mails, then treats him like a dog for a month. Husband needs to move on.

Really nice for a first try !

5*

Husband needs to grow a set.... pathetic excuse of a man.

He couldnt set his ego aside. He agreed to the bet and took his time to set her yo. At any moment he could have been the adult and taken a step back but he didn’t and then he compounded matters by picking up Denise.

As the author, you told us he stopped; but as far as everyone else was concerned, he went through with it snd then rather than speaking up, he ran away and hid. And, in my opinion, blamed it all on his wife.

He is a shitty husband and a pathetic excuse for a man.

Congrats on your first story, it was well written and flowed nicely. What looked like being a standard BTB turned into a reconciliation, no doubt the BTB 'real men' will give their opinion on that.

Personally I have no issue with the plot, but I thought the first person POV, as in so many other stories, distorted much of the balance and gave a biased view of what occurred. We have two idiots making a stupid wager and as far as either was concerned the other was going through with it. When the man loses, no matter that he suddenly had a change of heart, he runs away in a childish strop. We then get everything from his side: how he's such a great bloke and she's a cruel, cheating slut. However, put yourself in her shoes: she fucked a stranger, to which they both concented, and as far as she knew he did the same. But not only that, after she came home to collect her winnings he disappeared for days without word, she could only assume he was shacked up and still fucking his new girlfriend. So who can blame her for being angry and spiteful? Maybe written from the third person POV we might have learned what she was going though, how, to her, he was the uncaring cheating bastard. There are always two sides to a story, here we just got one, petulant view point

Then the final meeting, as each spoke of what they'd been up to, it came across like a newspaper report, no personality or emotion, just the facts. Not really they way people talk, especially people trying to become more intimate.

However all in all a decent story, better than most lately, and a nice change from those endless and mind numbingly boring February spin offs. And it kept me interested even if sometimes for the wrong reason. One final thought though: when she mentioned Denise, he said nothing happened as she was too young and inexperienced for him, this coming from probably the most immature twat you're likely to come across.

Don't write any more, at least not in that category. It's the gross story of a beta husband cuckold, a typical RAAcuck story. The matter is simple, she betrayed him no. Any real man would divorce the selfish whore immediately after the betrayal. Obviously wimps, cucks trolls will love it. But we real men know pride and honor

LEGIO PATRIA NOSTRA MACHO CHAD !!!! 1*

Must admit I didn't know that it's impossible for a man to have an iota of self-esteem unless he is 6"5" and an ex Navy Seal trained to kill with only his bare hands or doesn't have nine inches. Thanks for the information grandpa.

The set-up hooked me, but the development and the resolution were comparatively weak. Still, promising first story.

One story, shitty rating, maybe you should smarten up and change genre or stop writing altogether if this is all you have. 1/5

I just don't understand how any man can believe this shit.

It's over move on.

Please do us a favor : stop writing !

wow. she is dangerous. Why he didn't just go for the divorce straight away is beyond me.

The prose flows very well. Unfortunately, we get the quackery of counseling, feminist bullshit about "male ego" (another dishonest LW cliche), an utter bitch of a wife, a husband character, who like so many LW husbands, is a largely feminized male, the "big cock" fallacy (Yes, it's a pun. Generally, this cliche strongly suggests that an author knows little about women and either is insecure about his size or is a closeted homosexual.), and the prospect of a RAAC. What makes you think that any man would take the bitch back? She's had a personality transplant because she learns that he didn't fuck around? It only wopuld mean to her that she "won" the game entirely. He went back like a fucking cuck in the first place, and you make it appear that he'll do it again. You started with an interesting, but marginally plausible premise. The story goes off the rails when he goes back. Overall, beginning with Alison's photos you deviated from an interesting plot idea and started working the story around some of the most shopworn LW cliches. A new author may feel the cliches are a necessary part of an LW story, but they aren't. I think you have talent and can do much better. Keep writing.

After what the wife did and said I would definitely not go back to her. But I guess some people would. Interesting story.

Kind of like the story- very well planned, thought out, and written. I just hate the thought of there being a reconciliation here. I don't mind RAAC's with the proper remorse, time spent, and forgiveness, but with the horrible month she put him thru after her infidelity, NO. There was absolutely no love there, no respect, and no chance of them staying together happily. Run.

She's evil to the core, completely selfish and self-absorbed, no room in her heart for anyone but herself and he's excited she may allow him her company on another run? He's beyond a wimp and deserves whatever he gets!

Alison has to go. Chalk up the eight years as a tutorial on how to not have a successful relationship and use it to make anything in the future work.

And what a stupid bet. A guy has to work to pull a woman for just a quick fuck. All a woman has to do is say,"wanna fuck?", contest over.

Time for them both to move on She can find 1 a wimp , or 2 some stud with a big cock, He needs to get his ass out of his head and find a life partner to share his life with. His first wife is not the one he needs to have anything to do with.

Interesting and creative premise, and very well written! Please write more.

Alison's true nature surfaced to show what an evil sadistic monster she is. Jeff needs to run away and don't look back.

I liked the story--kept me engaged and reading. I will look forward to more of your work.

Thanks, ohio

I thought this was a pretty good story. The tension created in the story was the best feature. It would help a humble reader to occasionally add - she said what ever - he replied, I did occasionally get lost in the dialogue. Looking forward to your next one.

as others have said this is a decent story, but it comes off as more of an outline of a story then a full start-middle-ending sort of story.

intimidate example that comes to mind is that it would have been interesting to have a more fleshed out counseling session/s.

I would love to see a sequel where the wife unpacks more of what happened, or another story set from her perspective.

forgot the cuck tag

I can’t see how they will ever be equals , her going way too far then embellishing it , him taking the high road at the last minute . Then there is the 28 days of torture both physically and mentally that blatantly underlined his status well below her , and her truly cruel and domineering demeanor towards him . Then there is the fact that she still went out with Big Dick Head afterwards and split with him only because their projected future wasn’t ideal enough for her , yet he’s such a ‘really nice guy’ . His married friends manipulated him as well so there goes that level of trust . All in all she’s too cruel and vindictive , too manipulative and domineering , too conceited and judgemental ! He’s too submissive and soft , too forgiving and trusting ! It’d just be a matter of time before they fall back into a rut and old behaviors and animosity’s deep in ! Get away from the bitch ASAP and stay away !

They were both pretty stupid with to much booze and the really dumb bet. What is interesting is Jeff sobers up some sees the mistake and doesn't follow through. Alison sees nothing , has her sex and treats Jeff like shit during as well as after his payment being a complete bitch. Love is never mentioned and I dont't think there is any. Jeff , Alison has issues you would be better off moving on find someone who will love you and not have to compete.

Congratulations on your first submission. Pretty well written. Now as to the story itself, these two are grossly immature. Who the hell fucks up their marriage over some stupid ego contest? AND, what kinda moron is Jeff that he thinks he can win a pick up contest with any female in a hook up bar? His wife need only be clean and have most of her teeth to win that contest? My god, he knows the whole fishing with dynamite comparison and still makes the bet? What a dumb fuck! He was right that he should never have let her leave with some guy, but the rest is all on her. She takes the guy out, fucks him and sends pics to her husband. Then she rubs his face in for weeks afterwards. No, as soon as he got the pic and confirmed it was his wife, she’s history!

Don't be angry with me, but I can only say that idiots don't seem to die out. What, I ask, is your protagonist's fault? That he didn't fuck with his date? Or that he didn't tell her, that he didn't fuck her? What an idiotic babble! I don't need a counselor to find out that she's a slut and doesn't shy away from cheating. And then he lets her humiliate and boss him around and then tells her he's breaking up? And then he still gives her another chance? Why would he ever trust that slut again? I hate cuckold stories! 1*!!!

Ditto, move on. Women are out there, you need not do without, or be a Cuck.

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I like when a writer presents a different story line, you fit that bill. Yes, He found out that he and his wife were a bad fit, but they did last 5 years, that says something. Continue to run and talk.

I get the deal about it being his fault as well.

But apologize and then spend a month taking abuse? For the reward of working her up and then leave? Just to fulfill a bet with a woman he was going to leave anyway?

Boy, stupid is as stupid does.

Together 7 years send they still don't know each other or how to talk?

I didn't like this one. When he first heard he should have phoned and told her he did nothing because he loved her but could she say the same about her feelings for him?

Then he should have said he was going home to pack as he couldn't believe she had gone through with it. She realises she has gone too far and phones back to apologise but can't get him.

Rushing home to find him gone she is distraught as she does love him. After some time they meet to talk and it can then be either a btb or a raac.

As it was written they are portraid as morons.

OK first story but personally I wouldn't want to grow old with a woman like Alison.

Difficult to score. Needs some better proof reading in places. I agree the story line is a bit different, but, in the end, hubby is capitulating in return for sex. The wife "wins" again???

My wife and I are competitive individuals. We occasionally make wagers. We occasionally get drunk and occasionally make wagers while in different stages of inebriation. Even if we were ever to make a wager on who could laid first (which we would not), neither would actually ever dare to go through with it.

When reading the first part of this story, I assumed that they had an open marriage or some other understanding for them to actually seriously consider this. Doesn't make sense that a either spouse in a marriage where this wasn't previously discussed, would not only take it through fruition, but to then send graphic pictures and rub it in without any regards for their spouses feelings.

I understand others point that we only got his side of the story, and for all she knew he was shocked up with his conquest, but if that was the case, wouldn't he had sent some pics of his own? Or some bragging of his conquest too? When she received nothing from him if she had any awreness at all, would have figured that he failed and certainly not treated him the way that she did.

That being said, you write well do keep it up.

I love how you laid most of the blame on the husband. Really?

While the premise was god fucking awful on the stupid scale, the fact that it laid mostly on his shoulders was patently ridiculous.

Obviously you, with your new name and another "first" story are fine with full on cuck shit. Thats why hubby got none and she did and of course hubby became a spineless little bitch.

So dear readers, most of what this closeted male writes will be straight up cuck shit or, like this, smoke screen cuck shit. Either way he's tried this shit before and it didnt work then and it wont work now. But he will get 26thNCuck's little dicked approval.

she goes overboard and he goes along. Too sad a tale. Move along fellow, you are in for another beating if you wimp out again. Or better yet, let her know she owe you a month recompensation but you get live action fulfillment.

He has a conscious, and she doesn't. She has a serious character flaw me thinks.

Nice story about a hot looking cold hearted bitch wife that couldn't wait to get lots of strange dick only to realize too late that it might not have been the smartest thing to do. 5 stars

I actually liked it. For a change, the husband takes ownership of his role in competing with his wife to create the situation. Even though she takes her disrespect way too far, I think his reaction and emotions about the situation are more realistic than a straight BTB (burn the bitch) story.

Creative plot, I enjoyed it up to the part where Jeff got up after falling and finished the run talking with Allison. This is too much of a reconciliation vibe when these two need to be divorced and completely out of each other’s lives.

Had Jeff gotten up and walked away from Allison instead of having a conversation right then on her terms I might have liked the ending but this ending ruined it for me. I look forward to your future stories.

Why would he feel that his role should be to say no and guide her if she was over the top -AFTER? That is after he let her treat him like absolute shit for a month whilst grandstanding her infidelity in his face to the point of ending the marriage. He didn't see any need to say whoa before? A very contradictory / unrealistic story line but granted that there are cuckolds who would thrive in such an environment but then again that same type of personality would not dream to then separate and end his ongoing'joy'.

Interesting and entertaining story HickDickDoc. Kept me reading all the way to the end.

Seems unrealistic that this couple would stay together. More character development of their five year marriage would have made this story better.

Looking forward to more stories from HickDickDoc 🙂, in the future⌛️⏳️.

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3, an incomplete and odd, infuriating story. The competitive nature of the two can only explain so much such as why they she cheated and he nearly did but the fact the husband was willing to take abuse for a month after she blatantly cheated and humiliated him was terrible. Their marriage ended with almost no emotion from either side after the emotional rollercoaster he went through during the month of hell. The ending seems to set up a RAAC but even that doesn't go anywhere. I like reconciliation stories but she was too horrible to deserve it. Also the "revenge" this story is tagged with never happens. There are some good ideas in this story, I like the concept of the cheating happening thanks to being in competition, the friends who themselves were initially involved but quickly realized their mistake, and the fact the husband didn't immediately leave because he realized it was partially his fault what happened but with the character Alison you made her actions too extreme, you made her too nasty to make the husband stay feel right and any sort of reconciliation feel earned. Didn't much enjoy this story but I'd like to see more stories by this author as they work their craft, they have potential.

I will give you *** because it's your first. Thank you

Good story sure don't see the RAAC some say. They have split and gone separate ways all because of stupidity, even if they got back together it would not last that long demons lurk in the recesses of our minds all to ready to pounce when you least expect it.

Well told. Even drunk, would any couple really accept this wager? Even still, her venom and treatment of her husband was deplorable. Hard to believe even part of her imagined a total bounce back to normal after that. Would have been good to know her reaction to him walking out.

I look forward to seeing you progress as a writer here.

Congrats on your first. Good job with a new story line although I think the bet you can't fuck her/him has been used before and always involves a bar scene and alcohol, but hey there are only so many possibilities right? Well I rated it 5 stars overall and think you done a very good job although the ending kinda got convoluted with her showing up out of the clear blue and you ending with the possibility of them hooking up again. Seems to me that Allison has done irreparable damage to the marriage and hubby seems to have moved on. Looks like Ally maybe having some remorse after regaining some of her sanity and thinking about the whole situation of how she drug hubby through her humiliating dom game for a month.....kinda made her look like a schizo wife from hell! Well I would like to see another chapter of closure, so good luck and please continue to post.

4*, because I like RAAC if possible. But how she treated him during this month was over the top and it takes a lot forgivness.

Just change your name the HickDickCuck, that'll clear things up in the future....

Surely worth the 5. I hope you don't take comments too seriously. The audience here is not too accepting of things outside the norm and this tale was unique. I thought the tension from the competition was well done. In the face of disaster they cannot get out of that mode. I'd leave the story just as you did.

Sorry wimp not going to happen the human experience is non forgiving as is the pain, walk forwards not backward. life is too short to complicate the cycle and the journey. Your readers and liberal concept are to myopic (women course is determined at birth) prime direct till death she is what she is till death (Dump the inartistic beast) EVE relived. Adam doomed.! As are the reader in lemming-ville USA.

Another effing cuck story - no way he does the 30 days - no ways he feels bad for being moral to his marriage.. no way he puts up with her talking shit about him … no way he ever goes back to that cheating witch!!!

She was over the top with her victory month. He was stupid for making the bet and trusting her. Everyone knows that ANY good looking couldpick up a man any time she want and even a VERY good looking guy would fil more often than not so it was suckers bet. I think she owes him an apology for pushing him over the month.

You made Jeff such a damn wimp, spineless, weak.

Total BS story , no man would have put up with that crap…. First picture would have made it “ one and done” what man hating radical feminist wrote this beat the man down story….

0 star - stupid wimp/cuck crap.

This is a really bad story.

You lost me as a reader when the cuck went back home to clean up her mess.

Yes, it was a ONCE&DONE - divorce is guaranteed.

The skanky, slut would never get to touch him again.

However, I did give you 1 star to fuck with your average score.

your average score is already down to 3.43 and that should tell you the majority of readers on this site did not appreciate the story. RAAC are OK if they are deserved and in this case, that was not just a NO, but a HELL NO.

The skanky slut needed to be kicked to the curb - never to be seen or heard from again.

Bullshit story.

The story makes me think of Maya Angelou's famous quote: "when people show you who they are the first time believe them". A drunken one night fling is a tough pill to swallow, but carrying it on for a whole month? I agree with others that say that if you want to do a realistic RAAC, you have to paint the offender w/ at least some redeeming qualities besides hotness. The author did do an excellent job describing a bitch, so that makes the ending a non sequiter.

What a load of bollocks, the wimpy twat should have just fucked off and left her after the email of her fucking Brent

Cuck does a RAAC.

No matter the reason, she cheated, disrespected, and CUCKED him...

I thought it quite well done.

Sorry to see you haven’t written more