All Comments on 'Alex & Alexandra Ch. 01'

thats what you did...you put me in lala land...pls...you gotta do it again...

why this story is good cause it is just real story,things took time to reach till end and this story is real,

if it is long so that doesnot meant that story is bad

keep writing

rajan singh (india)

loved it. write more SHY VIRGIN FUCK STORIES

I honestly loved your story,Keep up the good work,Hope theres more to come about them

please less loving, we get the picture. How about dressing sexier for each other, maybe a cock ring for Alex and a garter with stocking Alexandria. showers and golden showers while their in together. Anal, cum swallowing and bring in another guy and girl gor some bi-fun, with lingerie for all ...Mike

so many stories are all sex.. its great to have some variety.. its these kinds that i like best now. the story was told perfectly.

Thanks!

This was a extremly great story it was sensitive romantic and sweet I could feel the love between them and I can't wait to read the sequles to come

THANX for the great story Anja

I agree with Absolutly amazing Please keep it and them going.

That was an awsome story please keep writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.

It was amazingly written. You could feel the love and passion these two siblings felt for each other. It was a slow process that the two siblings wanted to take, both making sure the other wanted it. I really believed they loved each other. I love stories you can feel what the characters are reading. A sign of a great writer. Keep up the good work. Congratulations on a job well done.

U need to be an author thats absolutely amazing

WHERES CHAPTER 2??!! u need to turn this into a series

you have a lot of stupid readers your story "ALEX&ALEXANDRA"was ok but very hard to read because you don't know how to write or spell go back to school and learn then do a rewrite and add the second chapter you write like a five year old this could have been an excelent story but you can't write or spell and you never finished it so it turned out shitty before you write any more learn the right way to do it

that was a brilliant stary, the way you got all that passion and love across, it was breathtaking. i hope you continue to write more for the benefit of all. thanks for a wonderful read, i look forward to the next instalments.

Sid

Please, oh please get an editor to help you translate your stories in the future. This is a good story if you can get past the bad word placement and the misspelling and wrong word usage. Thank you for your attempt.

It was really good. like the other readers said you just need to work on the grammar, and cut off the excess exclamation points. the way you wrote it, you say sentences like...

"I just woke up this morning!"

Some things dont need to be said like that, but it was still an excellent story, my first favorite on this site.

This is an excellent story, but the poor grammar, spelling and word selection are quite distracting. I do hope you continue the story, but some help in editing would be useful.

The English language [any version] is obviously not this author's first language. Either that, or he frequented the Obama education system while growing up.

Nevertheless, this is a storyteller!

This is so Hot, I hope you don't stop writing. F#%k those who tell you to...

I like the titanic <3

I liked how you took your time and didnt rush the sex excellent suspense

I really wish the webmasters would demand that all stories go through editors before posting. this could have been a good story IF it had been properly edited.

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I Love your writing I look forward to read continue.

Dude! Good? Hell! This was THE BOMB! awesome man.

You need help with your spelling. Learn the difference between lie and lay.

Fuck yeah

Almost unreadable ! worst grammar on entire site ! Couldn't finish first chapter .