All Comments on 'Alex in Pornoland Ch. 01'

...would have liked a bit more, though. The scene is nicely set up for what's to come, but this could have used some follow through.

I did say it's a short prologue with more to come!

Also the title contains a typo - it should be "Alex In Pornoland" and has been resubbed with the correction.

but a good start. Looking forward to see how this develops.

Thanks, dellagordo - - I have plans for this series to go on so fingers crossed people will like the later chapters more than this little tease. Judging by the votes, readers want sex, god dammit!

Can't wait! Exciting!

Please write more

And will be submitted in a week or two!

like how you kept at the suspience but try to have more sex are details like the doctor and nurse one.

Yep love it and your writing style and story flow. I'm hooked and I will be back for more. Thank you for writing this!

That aside I will say the man with the yellow eyes for me holds an interesting place in my imagination. I have another story that I am am writing (away from here atm) and there is a character with those eyes as well. I'm very interested in seeing where and when your main character and this yellow eyes will meet again

An interesting start. Can't wait to see what chapter 2 has in store for our hero.

Keep up the good writing.

Keeping it simple, and straight forward.

(((thumbs up!!/or, in this case, a five)))

Nice writing to open the story. Have you seen "Deep in the Valley"?? Similar plot.

Nicely written!¡!

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