All Comments on 'Alex - The Novella'

Beautifully written. When i first saw this story posted, I thought wow I don't even have to go back to reread Alex again to refamiliarize myself with the characters because I have read that story so many times. This one was truly engaging I couldn't put it down. I cried several times throughout. Loved it.

First time I've ever felt compelled to leave a comment in 3 years. I must thank you for finally finishing the story and bringing me some closure, it's well put together and an all around great story.

Thank you for sharing your new story

Still going to be hearing about Alex and Cady? I would like to see what happened with them.

Thank you. You have brightened many a day.

It was very well written, the plot and characters real, and no happy endings.

Well done.

My stomach is growling, i skipped breakfast. I couldn't stop reading, i had to know how it whent.

I hope someday that you will revisit alex and cady, it would be nice to know how their life came to be.

I'm so happy you came back and finished this!! Fabulous.

Well done this was so good. You have really created some great characters here - please keep writing

really enjoyed the story, hope you can continue their adventures. Know that you started a new one, so far so good.

Worth the reading

I love this story.

..... in both its incarnations and am looking forward to reading your next one.

Planned on reading a few pages last night before I went to bed but ended up sitting and reading right to the end at 2am!

Nicely done

ANOTHER amazing story. Thank you for sharing with us!

A definite 5 stars - couldn't stop reading once I found the story.

I'm so glad you took your time with this story (ahem, 8 year). BUT IT WAS SO WORTH IT. I LOVE ALEX! SUCH A FANGIRL MOMENT.

It was a little bit too long but overall, still enjoyed it

I can't believe this was FREE! Totally well-written with loveable caracters.

And can I just say that despite what anyone else says I think the length of your story is great. It's not rushed and progressed naturally. Fantastic read!

where's more!!!!

Thank you so much for sharing this story!

thank yo so much for finishing this story after all these years. i am in so many tears...

Thank you for writing

why was the ending so sad! i wanted them to have happy ending!

KillerRomance, You killed this story! It is/was so damn good and I'm looking forward to the new story featuring Maya and Grey. You're back on top! Congratulations and all the best on future works.

I really enjoyed this story. Can't wait to read more of yr stories.

Do you have any intention of finishing St. Vincente?

Splendid plot, characterization, and execution. Turn it into an epic!

Finally, a story set in Singapore, a place i call home. I m not sure if you are a Singaporean, but you did Auntie Lin's Singlish well. Looking fwd to your next work of art.

There is such love comfort, and passion in this story it enriches the reader.

I'm so glad I found this story. Thank You.

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You write so beautifully, thank you.

I read this story a couple of years ago, and loved it then. I am going back and re-reading some of these stories, and found this one again. I loved it even more this time! Thank you for sharing this with us!

What a totally beautiful story.

Someone commented it was too long, I have to reject that, I wish it had gone on forever.

If I can get my writing half as good, I'll be happy.

Beautiful, I think this is a perfectly paced story. Love these characters!

You know you're reading a porn story when the teachers or hospital administrators are wearing stilletos. Gots ta feed that shoe fetish monster...

Beautifully done, and very well written! Thank you!

please make a sequel i need them to have a child

Please, please, please tell us more of Alex & Cady's story. Do they go to New York? Do they talk about kids? This was so wonderful, I need to know more!

this is my favorite romance-related story i've ever read, i keep coming back to it.

Killer Romance this is a fantastic story it cannot end here you must let us know about the wedding and these two lovers how they become a couple please you are a brilliant writer thank you.xxxxxxx

I've read this hundreds of times but I have questions. When Alex was at school Cady caught Alex and Mindy in the toilets. This is the only part I don't like and because Alex said she'd been hung up on Cady since day one but when they get caught out, Alex gets all smug about it and the giggling as Cady left. A bit nasty if you ask me. Someone hung up on another wouldn't act like that. Did Alex lie?

Also into the story Cady voice chats her mom where Alex parades around nakied. Alex makes a comment after how Cady and her mom look so alike and Cady responds she'd rather look like her than a stranger she doesn't know. Does that mean Cady is adopted? because after reading this soooo many times their is no other information about this. Just seems so random.

This is one of my favourite stories and always a go to when I want to relax and enjoy so thank you.

Breath taking strory! I am a huge fan of long stories! This exceeded my expectations!

Parents love trust kids and those expectations or social standings or religious fanatics ....... Destroying a kids life a kids hearts a kids trust a kids soul is a worst case scenario but unfortunately standard ..... Lily writing about horror, touching such delicate human stupidity and spinning a wonderful story around is talented sensual emotional wonderful writing

Thank you for sharing this nice piece of ART

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I can easily see 8 years of love in this. I've gone over it multiple times. What you got wrong was … nothing. Let it go. You did well. The story is better than good.

Now I'll go one to read your other work.

8 years huh, I don’t think anything good have been done better…great job