All Comments on 'Alexis'

You were right with 8 it was confusing. I love daddy daughter fucking but bringing in the moms and sons it was too much. It's the first time I stopped reading literotica story to end. Writing was good. Daddys and daughters in a fuck fest would have been enough

Still gave you 5 stars

You do awesome stories, Wish the guys had messed around too but you have plenty of other great stories with that!

Great read. You have all the time in the world to write something, so take your time. It helps to visualize everything. I understand the difficulty though because I've been there. I wrote an orgy scene that included eleven adults and three children. It took about 3 days to write/read/edit and perfect. In the time it takes to write "this next part is confusing", you could relax for a moment and figure out how to write it out and make it easy to read. It's more effort, but that is the measure of a great writer.

I am glad you have started to write again. Satisfying porn is rare.

Wonderful story. LOVED it!

Great story. I hope there is a part 2 with more incestuous swapping and a few DP's.

Wow, you have had the most fascinating life, or have done a lot of research, or both. Gave it 5 *'s.

Stimulating but cluttered . . . .

Wild