All Comments on 'Alexis and the Peeping Tom'

Please leave comments so that I can see what you think! Then I know what to do for the next story as well

...a little confusing. In the first paragraph you say that the maintenance man was "rotund", and in the fourth paragraph you say that he is "lean". It cannot be both: rotund means "fat".

I realized after the fact that I had left a couple paragraphs out- the ones that made sure that you knew that Tom was not the first man she sees.

There is a reference, howwever, about how he followed the first man in.

Sorry for the in-clarity. In the next story, which I am working on, I will make sure there are no gaps like that in there.

Loved the seductive teasing! Nicely done.

Liked the read but was distracted by the many typos and spelling errors. Do a spell and grammer check before posting.

I love how you have got so much action going on and written in a way that it flows really well. I am now a real big fan, great read! X X

Saw several misspellings that turned me off.

Excellent loved how she took his cock in all holes. I hope the next chapter has even more hard sex in it, even a facial.

I serviced HVAC units for five years. During that time I must have fucked over 100 housewives. One was the wife of the local news anchor. She would call me up about once a month to and say her air conditioner must be out because she was getting so hot she couldn’t even wear clothes. I found out that her husband knew and had even watched us one time.