by JaneTheDomme
It was sensual, and had lots of juicy details.
Good storytelling, but didn't drag on and on. It was concise, but had enough detail to really make the reader visualise what was going on. A tight little story. Thank you very, very much for publishing it! Five stars
Sorry , was a great little story. Look forward to reading your work.
really hope you write some more chapters to this really loved tabby
One of your best! Love the intensity and the developing underlying intrigue mesh in the story line. Also, always very hot when two female athletes, soccer and rugby, can get together for some mutual appreciation!
A great story and you really bring the characters to life! Hope you continue this!
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