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All Comments on 'Alex's Punishment Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Love this

I love this story! Please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

i love it. please continue

SharpguySharpguyabout 13 years ago
Hmmmmmm, not so much

I agree with Mariasmd...how tight is a 20 yo girl? And I have trouble buying the plot with a prof. who keeps ginger root and paddles in his office. I'm all about fantasy, but this didn't capture my attention.

Also, she was late for a morning class, then had only 30 minutes to go back to his office after returning to her dorm. What happened to the rest of the day? Several paragraphs could have added to the build up and anticipation. Was she eager to go back...scared...hopeful?

mariasmdmariasmdabout 13 years ago
ummm

abnormally tight for a 20 year old? it takes like 3 children to really stress a vagina. not even that. ginger root? ouch!

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My name is Alexandra and I am 24 years old from Mississippi. I'm a country girl that loves to write and it shows. I spend my spare time writing little stories and I hope to turn them into something big one day. I'm soon to be married and my fiance loves reading my erotic stori...