by Hugo_S
So, "She had one long toned brown leg crossed over the other .." and yet she was standing??
Extremely HOT and well written... and HOT! Yes, I know I said "HOT" twice. Ok, three times counting the title. :P
I also know that you described Emma in Pt. 1 as a cross between Zoe Saldana and Lacy Duvalle, but with the accent, I can't help picturing Naomie Harris as Emma. She's one of my favorite British sistas. Anyway...
5 HUGE Stars!
Oh, and once again, this was FULL-ON SCORCHING HOT!
@Anonymous
You've never seen a woman stand with her legs crossed at the ankles? Seriously? It happens. You've never seen that? Really? Geez...
Just thought that comment needed an answer. lol
Thanks for the comments guys. They mean a lot! I'm currently writing part 3, which will probably be the final part, and am hoping to have it uploaded soon. :)
You had a great storyline going there, but for me the anal kinda kills it. I hope the next chapter revisits the taboo of their stepmother/stepson relationship and focus' more on the breeding aspects of Alex replacing his father as her new lover.