All Comments on 'Alice'

Hate when writers can not come up with their own ideas.

ok ... so I was not the only person who saw this as nothing more than a rip-off of Ex Machina

and gave it a 5

Get inspired by something else and write along its lines. The level of spelling, grammar and capitalization mistakes was just far too high, even for me.

Random gratis to Adam for being able to speak while in an alcohol induced coma, much less move around without vomiting on everything in his stupor.

Sadly it's not yours. 1/5... next time come up with an idea of your own.

Well, nice work xD there was efforts to turn a familiar story to something more of your own.

Reminds me of when people make fairytale adaptations

I started reading this and was like didnt i just see a movie like this. This belongs on moviespoilers.net not literotica. Disappointed.

Yeah, anyone can copy a movies script with the exeption of the sister the setting, competition, robot escaping deviant AI creator, all else a direct copy of Ex Machina.

Total plagiarism throughout

This is theft, plain and simple. You should be ashamed of yourself

This story seems exactly like the plot to ex machina the movie, subtle twists here and there but overall it's the same, with the shorting of the power grid through the charger you until the trapping them in the house.