All Comments on 'Alice Ch. 01'

You already know what I think, it more than deserved to be published!

Keep it going, can't wait for a 2nd chapter!

Wow this was intense. I never go for gun play, but it didn't really bother me here. Please more nownownow.

One of the first things that comes to my mind is "Purrrrr", as in that natural purr I make when I am thoroughly aroused. Uuhhh. This guy is hot, and I know its going to be good. I hope the story is completed! There are far too many delish stories that never get finished! Reading on...

Nice writing. You have a gift. I want more. Please?