All Comments on 'Alice Pt. 05'

i enjoyed your story very much, though you ended it seeming in the middle of a thought. please continue the story.

I enjoyed every one of your stories but you seemed to get confused near the end and started calling Patricia Pauline 4 or 5 times....then, you rushed the ending, finishing a little awkwardly. The sex was a little over the top and even for fantasy a little hard to believe.