All Comments on 'Alien Mine Ch. 12b'

Thank you for the latest chapters. Your story is developing with the characters and their personalities coming through more and more.

I appreciate you sharing your creativity with all of us on this site and look forward to seeing you develop this into the Epic story you have started.

Thank you for sharing this adventure with us. I predict a minor arms race in the next few chapters as both sides attempt to create more power in a smaller package. The home base of the OM must be found. 5 stars on every chapter so far.

The Om remind me of the bugs from Starship Troopers. Same tactics, underground, organized by a hive with a Mind instead of a brain...