All Comments on 'Alien Mine Ch. 13'

Much appreciated.

Real sci-fi with a good dose of sex. A heady mixture, well written. Please keep going until the story is concluded. Will that be when the Om mothership arrives with a huge fight?

Can't wait for the next instalment...

Great, looking forward to lots more soon I hope. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Interesting read. Has certainly improved from the first chapter, which I apparently had read awhile ago and didn't remember. Only the star rating I left told me that I had read it before. After noticing this new chapter recently and the improved scores, I decided to give it another go. However, despite the improvement, it still needs editing work, especially with the placement of punctuation and spacing between paragraphs and dialogue.

On another note, I think it might be high time for Rhys and the team to get some satellites of their own up in orbit, watching not only the planet but space as well. They're pretty much blind to whatever is up there, as evidenced by them running across those two Om ships awhile ago. If they had satellites up, they probably would have seen those ships leaving the planet.

Also, I'm not so sure on how effective having a base in orbit around Uranus is going to be, at least with regards to acting as the first line of defense for the solar system. It won't be of much use if the Om arrive in system on the opposite side of the system from where Uranus is. They may need to build a space station or two to cover that area.

Speaking of space, has there been any reaction to that flash of light from the destruction of the Om ship, the one that got hit by a missile going in excess of .5c? I believe it was mentioned that it would be hard to miss back on Earth.

Anyways, looking forward to more. Keep it up.

Really glad to read more of this awesome story. Really looking forward to your next update.