All Comments on 'Alien Mine'

I can't wait to see where this goes!

Interesting start, looking forward to the adventure!

I am enjoying it already. It needs more character development, but the circumstances keep that in future chapters. The sex was well done and character responses were well written. I look forward to the next chapter.

you write like Dean Kunts.... the way you describe foods, and tastes... and a little of your logical descriptive science, where it isn't necessary to be perfectly technical...

i do appreciate you not ruing the story with over bearing sex explanations, just enough taboo to make it interesting... you could use a stricter editor tho...