All Comments on 'Alien Possession Ch. 02'

Gaseous life forms that stumble through society spreading chaos in their desire for the physical sensation of sex. Not only seeming young, almost juvenile, these two careen from disaster to catastrophe with sublime, self-absorbed ignorance. I'd not be surprised to hear Valley-speak next, or at least the alien version of it. "Totally carbon nano-tubular, Szx'ee!"

Fascinating in a train wreck sort of way. 5*

Definitely sounds like interference to me! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.