All Comments on 'Alisha's Journey'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
OMG!!

Hope that you continue with thses two.......I CAME TWICE!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Why so short?

Great start, but the other readers comments aside, I barely had time to get into the story before it was over. Double the length to start and you'll really be getting somewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Please

I gave up. Please learn the difference between there, their and they're. It's not tough.

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