All Comments on 'Alison, Shy Wife and Mother'

Good story, but never confess (unless you think that it will turn him on).

Let's see what the confession will bring...But I haven't high hopes in that part...What she didn't thought was about her son...And the damages this could bring to the child...Another flaw in her character was her lack of ambition, her conform with her job being stalled...2* for now

looking forward to the next installment....4

Seeing the rest was written in normal and correct English spelling I am u sure, but I really hope English is not your native language ...

She won't get it and if she keeps her son he will grow up to cheat on his wife too. The apples will only drop as far from the tree as their role models let them and you can bet she will blame someone other than herself and get custody and money from the cheated husband

and hope david and Allison have more passion together, with David fucking her ass and Allison doing ass-to-mouth

lol, bareback sex, she thought twice a year was a long time.............

And another story the asshole didn't like. WTF Hey asshole of LIT tell us one LW story you enjoyed. I gave this a 5 and to ay eat shit annony!

You still are, And you will be to the day you die which we all hope is today!! Your wife said to tell you to eat shit!!!

So why not have that conversation with Steven (husband).instead of cheating if he denied her , maybe she would cheat. But the are a lot of unanswered questions here. Cheating solves nothing it only make the situation worse. We will see in part 2 where this author takes this story.35

Thanks for taking a few minutes to write this tepid foam.

Short and to the point. Might have been better if more buildup had been used, but for a one pager it ain't bad. I see you collected all the usual comments from the intellectuals who haunt the pages of LW. Looking forward to next chapter, but don't forget about the old axiom 'keep it believable'.

Good Luck!

But likely to give her whiplash.

Just too unbelievable, even for fiction.

......"Oh, how could I have done this to my husband?", collection of pointless, directed insufficient self-delusion. Next we'll read that her husband gets hot over it and wants her to do it every day, then "tell me every detail", so he can masturbate uselessly into a hand-towel.

More likely, the cracker been dancing with someone at his work for some time. If wifey has so much going on, he's either a playa or a fool. Wifey, can't be so naive and self absorbed at the same time, either.

She did it because she wanted sex and he offered it. Absent husband, what was she to do?

Try TALKING!

Well written, just feckless.

Sexy and interesting looking forward to next submission. Thanks for sharing.

I liked it, regardless of does it make sense or not it is a fun story and not all that hard to see how it might happen. Sometimes, just like men think with their cocks.....we ladies can think wiith our clits as well. Enjoy the store, well written, fast pace and fun. Go for chapter two and let's see what happend. Hugs to all.....Nadine

I enjoyed it. Happy you are taking some time between chapters. Looking forward to the next one.

Martian slut ray? You didn't do chap2, praise be, so we will never know.

I'm sure you are writing about my wife and her boss, the names are the same and I bet you are David.

...the Martians packed up the Slut Ray and loaded it into the flying saucer, jumped in after it and zoomed off up the air duct, all the while laughing their little Martian heads off at how easy it was to turn another faithful wife into an instant slut.

This was the 563rd one they'd turned and so far they were leading the contest. At this rate they would easily win and go back to Mars as wealthy little fuckers.

In 4 years. Safe to say a one shot story.

WTF??? You need to post the Part 2 dude..