by Publius68
Excellent story. Glad to see you keeping it going. Not sure what's left as the school year comes to an end for this group, but hope the story can continue for a long time.
I loved your first set of Alistair stories. This set might be better. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this. You are a very good author. I hope you continue!
Did not comment on Chapter one, tho't I would see how 2nd chapter ironed out!!
This was more than 'adequate' to say the least...that Petra is NOT a lesbian is quite the turn of story...that some douché that was upset when she stopped him before crossing home plate would do that to her...I hope Alistair does find him, then give him a beat-down. Guys who do that should be castrated...too stupid to be allowed to procreate.
That Petra and Bridget went through with their attraction to each other, in this circumstance, was so much more than just HOT...it was surreal, going to completion, and enjoying being together like that, the three of them; I hope it happens again, and again...
Bridget...I know they have this 'no-secrets' pact going on...but she should have explained that first before giving the info to Petra with both barrels!! Sensory Overload, anyone????
The future looks 🌞 bright for our MC..."Poppy's Mom" is the next target/recipient of Al's attentions?? How...???? Cannot wait to see how this one unfolds!!
Five**5**Stars...absolutely deserved, plus more. And, of course I rated it a "5"...cannot be dragging down the "average" on author's rating...
I loved this series from the start. I was hoping for a return to Alistaires' home town for the summer and him getting back together with Carrie and the twins!