All Comments on 'All a Sister Needs is her Brother Ch. 02'

by LustinLondon

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Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesalmost 7 years ago
And now for Chapter 3

I am SURE that it will also be a true love story in it's incest! Yes, a LOVE story!

TheHornyPhoenixTheHornyPhoenixalmost 7 years ago
In truth, I started laughing

It was good.

sabra16023sabra16023almost 7 years ago
Yes!! Chapter 3

Great story. Waiting for chapter 3. Thanks

TakeatumblewithmeTakeatumblewithmealmost 7 years ago

I agree with Many_Memories this is a love story as well as an incest story!

It have everything; it was hot enough to make to twitch and want more but it has the element of love in every sentence between the main characters!

I hope you continue to write more to the story and write new stories as your writing is 10/10

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please tell me there's more where this one came from!?

Though the last few scenes might not be exactly to my liking it was still a great siblings romance story with loads of hot sex and deserved retribution. Now I'm dying to see how things go with their parents and where & how they decide to spend the rest of eternity!

Easily a 5*!

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckalmost 7 years ago
It's a 10

Sometimes a prick like that needs the shit slapped out of his artificial ego. Making him suck a dick was priceless.

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 7 years ago
Fantastic

This chapter was fantastic. I would have loved to see Rachel sit on Nate's face making Adam's cum drop into Nate's mouth adding more humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
write another chapter

and give nate a chance to stay with them as their sub who does nothing but clean them and if he is good gets to lick their asses after they go shit. He can still work and give them all the money he earns but he must be their slave in all ways. Oh I wish I were Nate. 4yourpleasureiam

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
awesome

The prick got what he deserved and disappear. Adam and Rachel have tons of adventurous sessions ahead, I would hope. The true love they share.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Please have adam seduce the mother and dominate the workaholic father as well

svfd1723svfd1723over 6 years ago
Great read

Please keep going it is getting so good and could go so many directions.

BigBillNBigBillNover 6 years ago
Please continue with this

FANTASTIC!!! Please continue on this, as what the others have wrote as well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good JOB. He got what he deserves!

Very Good, I feel for Rachel and Nate can never be in the position he had and never will! Complete the storytelling and show how his actions (Nate) destroy any concept of him being a real human.

JagnagJagnagover 6 years ago
Outstanding

You have a real talent here aswell as a very dark side too.

Outstanding tale of woe, retribution & happiness in one.

Congratulations i loved it

5*+

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Wow

Just loved this chapter too. Please keep going and soon if you can.

MhouserMhouseralmost 6 years ago
Finish

Come on you've got to finish this, just don't add anyone to their love

windfire1windfire1about 5 years ago
Ch. 03

Chapter 3 would be awesome

ijkdenemijkdenemover 4 years ago
lol. great sequel

could do with more in the series

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Keep going

Keep going please

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chapter 3!!??

Oh come on. Push chapter three out!

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

Yes, chapter 3. AA++

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story

Just to bad it unfinished, no Ch. 3..

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 2 years ago

Too much evil for this to be erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Chapter 3???? No? Come on!!!!

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 1 year ago

More please, I hope he takes her back to live with him and they have a happy ending and some babies.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Was really good up until the gay shit...That's when I quit reading.

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