by LustinLondon
I am SURE that it will also be a true love story in it's incest! Yes, a LOVE story!
I agree with Many_Memories this is a love story as well as an incest story!
It have everything; it was hot enough to make to twitch and want more but it has the element of love in every sentence between the main characters!
I hope you continue to write more to the story and write new stories as your writing is 10/10
Though the last few scenes might not be exactly to my liking it was still a great siblings romance story with loads of hot sex and deserved retribution. Now I'm dying to see how things go with their parents and where & how they decide to spend the rest of eternity!
Easily a 5*!
Sometimes a prick like that needs the shit slapped out of his artificial ego. Making him suck a dick was priceless.
This chapter was fantastic. I would have loved to see Rachel sit on Nate's face making Adam's cum drop into Nate's mouth adding more humiliation.
and give nate a chance to stay with them as their sub who does nothing but clean them and if he is good gets to lick their asses after they go shit. He can still work and give them all the money he earns but he must be their slave in all ways. Oh I wish I were Nate. 4yourpleasureiam
The prick got what he deserved and disappear. Adam and Rachel have tons of adventurous sessions ahead, I would hope. The true love they share.
Please have adam seduce the mother and dominate the workaholic father as well
Please keep going it is getting so good and could go so many directions.
FANTASTIC!!! Please continue on this, as what the others have wrote as well!
Very Good, I feel for Rachel and Nate can never be in the position he had and never will! Complete the storytelling and show how his actions (Nate) destroy any concept of him being a real human.
You have a real talent here aswell as a very dark side too.
Outstanding tale of woe, retribution & happiness in one.
Congratulations i loved it
5*+
Come on you've got to finish this, just don't add anyone to their love
More please, I hope he takes her back to live with him and they have a happy ending and some babies.