All Comments on 'All (Almost) in the Family'

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don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Very, Very Wonderful!

This story needs a continuation. Inasmuch as they are not blood related, they should be allowed to fuck. And his father and her step-father should realize this and allow them to make all the grandchildren they can make for him, supporting them fully.

Xman72357Xman72357almost 19 years ago
Great Story Please continue

THis story is great. I hope you lan on a sequel to let us know how it turns out with their parents.

Alien47Alien47almost 19 years ago
Terrific!

Need anyone say more?

Only ask for - more, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
MORE!

MORE! MORE! OH MY GOD, I NEED MORE!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
strange

to strange i couldn't even get past the first few paragraphs no guy would act like that when she stated to laugh he would have left if he was so nervous and uncertain he never would have been in her room in the frist place pease do a rewrite and keep it realistic and believable

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Really liked this story, it really needs a sequel

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