All Comments on 'All Black And White'

Writers should have at least a basic understanding of the language in which they write.

There is all the difference in the world between 'your' and 'you're'. They have different meanings. Your misuse of punctuation in the final sentence of YOUR story produces complete gibberish

Boring, but your're young, hopefully, you'll get better....

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