by KickIt2Me
That's what I'm talking about. Exquisite. Great action. Great humour. Some classic lines.
Wow. I like the scenario you laid out. Great imagination backed up by just enough detail to allow my mind to bridge the gap. You took me there.
There is no place to vote. If I could I would give it five stars. It was really good. Had enough detail to be enjoyable with it being too much. The scene was very believable and exciting.
Fantastic writing. We'll thought out, great timeline and just enough details.
Congrats on the monthly contest win! When is your next story going to show up?
I liked the tantalizing slow buildup, taking turns and edging that went along with that. Very hot story.
Great story!!!!! That's a perfect end of a fantastic night out with your significant other, be it girlfriend or wife.
I was dripping wet by the end. Would love to play this out with my husband. You did a fantastic job of helping me see what it would be like for him and now all I can think about is how hot it would be to watch him blindfolded and getting his cock sucked by a parade of women.
I'm not sure who you are that wrote this, but please know that your writing conveys so much detail per word used. The way that you constructed this story kept such a high pace but also brought each character to life through a mix of their sexuality, dialogue and interactions is so impressive. If you tried writing on other topics I think you would do well too
Very sexy and erotic story. Any man would love to be in this position. Great job done by the author.