All Comments on 'All I Got for Christmas'

Holy fucking hell, that was awesome! I love every sentence of it, the slow revealing of Rachel's thoughts and past experiences makes on to read further and further. Thank you for that fantastic treat!

It is amazing word, saccharine. Uncommon and used perfectly.

A confusing mess of thoughts, fantasies and reality. No description of what was happening, just a poorly written piece.

Wow, sp9983 was an asshole. Ignore that noise and keep writing. Pretty well written, good pacing, interesting interleaving of various elements and hint dropping, plenty erotic. The psychological second-guessing was especially good. The prose was a little purple but it fit the overall personality of the subject and aesthetic.

honestly really beautiful

Another otherwise perfect story that stops precisely where it shouldn't.