All Comments on 'All I Want for Christmas'

Thanks for the story!

Happy holidays to all.

Nice to see you back and appreciate the light story. I grew up in Lancaster and know how they take care of the roads in snow. Two inches and my home town almost shut down.

...I never thought of having her sent to a Mexican whorehouse. What a warm Christmas thought to be left with. HOE HOE HOE!

Thanks for the entertainment.

Loved it... I hated my mother-in-law she really was an evil person luckily my wife never turned out anything like her. When my mother-in-law died and was buried it took a year for grass to grow on her grave. I always said it was because she was so evil that her body poisoned the ground.

Woodward, Lancaster sounds like Victoria B.C. Contrary to what most Americans think the Pacific North west of British Columbia gets very little if any snow.

Great cute story - very well composed and developed. Great author

Santa Claus is the jolly old elf, Santa Clause is the movie title.

*****that was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.

Louise the Louse woke up in her car. The snow was really coming down now... She turned the key and started her car... She drove home. walked into her house and was surprised that someone had set up a Christmas Tree in her living room....There were brightly wrapped Christmas presents with her name on them... She opened the first present. Her smile couldn't get any bigger... It was her old Raggedy-Ann doll. Like new. If she didn't know better. it was the exact same one she once had... the second present was the doll house she had always wanted for Christmas which her Father and Mother said was too big... Then the Third present. she opened and all inside it was a piece of black coal with a note... "Whatever happened to that little girl that used to say how much she always looked forward to Christmas?" The next day. She drove over to her daughter and her daughter's husbands house... Opening the door. she apologized for being a mean ol' bitch.... they invited her in and suddenly, Louise the louse was gone... Louise, Rachel and John settled down with hot chocolate as family.... Louise was no longer the hateful woman she had become..... The End