All Comments on 'All I Want for Christmas'

This is the first gay story I've ever read. I've seen gay porn and was turned on by the domination of one man over another, but I never wanted to read about it because I figured a story exactly like a gay porn would be rough and without emotion. But this story had a great plot and plenty of emotion. I felt what Justin and Orin felt and it aroused me. I honestly loved it. I think you should do a sequel showing a few years later, how it all turned out. *Love Your Style*

(Just so you know, I'm female.)

I love the depth of the characters, this story demonstrates what truly great erotica can be, and reminds us that no matter what else you bring into the equation, sex is always about the people.

So this is what you have been doing for the past couple of months. I was getting worried until the end that you lost your supernatural flare and created a new interest ;)

More words than strictly necessary at times, but overall I would say quite excellent.

Good luck in the contest.

It comes as no surprise, whenever Sach writes something it's always brilliant :)

I loved this story. The build up was great and to be able to show your love that way with a guy was wonderful. To be able to have the opportunely and not be afraid to follow thru was a dream come true. Gale

Amazing story! I loved the emotional build up. I almost cried ( I don't cry all that easily)

Jenna

I've never really been into gay stories, being straight and not much of an anal person... but this really is a lovely story! Great work!

Tender, with feeling, a great story.

wonderful idea carried out with deep emotion.

That was one hell of a story!

I enjoyed it so much. The feelings seem so real and once again you charmed me with your art of writing.

Just please go on in this way!

fucking fantastic. amazing buildup, great lovescene (long, but necessarily so,) and I actually cared about the characters. great job!

A bit slow to get started and perhaps the sex scene was unnecessarily prolonged, but there is a lot of sincere feeling here, and the story is believable. Good luck in the contest!